SHF High-school Fanfic

[ShizukiIchino]

UPDATE

Wow, I'm at a good point with the final chapter. Some parts have been really difficult to write.
I even managed to include Anon, who I thought I would have to cut.

Some parts made me cry. How cringe can you be to cry over what you wrote yourself?
Particularly the part with Mama and Danny. I'm too sensitive.

I just have the final part left, which will be just as difficult.

Danny's Part 99%
Azure's Part 99%
PAM'S Part 99%
Shizuki's Part 99%
Mama's Part 99%
Final Act 10%

"Final Act 10%" I feel like I will read a whole volume when it just one chapter. Good luck! I hoping for the best of you.

 

[MidnightFox]

Why tho? It just normal background.

I meant it as you might as well be staring at the background and it will be exactly the same as playing the game

 

[Azure_Fog]

I tried that extrapolation thingy yesterday and it was fun though I must say, I'm hoping they gonna do some changes to a couple of things, like no way to back out from equation exchange and let us decide if we want to use our own gear or the mapped one. Thats for entire DU really. And rng is pretty bad too. Very skewed towards Elation, Remember and Preservation or Propagation and it's messing up my runs

But you don’t have to exchange equations? Unless I’m missing something? And also the rng is indeed messed with through it~ it’s purposely more random~

 

[Deleted member 146224]

But you don’t have to exchange equations? Unless I’m missing something? And also the rng is indeed messed with through it~ it’s purposely more random~

I mean if you start the process there's no back button and you have pick something new (unless they keep the same one and i just didn't notice, because every single one I'm getting if for follow up attack and freeze ). It would be nice if there was an option to back out

I'm yet to see the randomness, because all they give me is follow-up attack when I'm trying to use Firefly

 

[ShizukiIchino]

I meant it as you might as well be staring at the background and it will be exactly the same as playing the game

Well I sometimes didn't know what to play even tho I had many games, I just waiting for invitations. And my pc is not high-end. And I just look at the background and do staring contest or thinking of another fanfiction.

 

[MatchaChocolate69]

I wrote the last word of the final act.


Now I just have to do editing and finishing touches.

"Final Act 10%" I feel like I will read a whole volume when it just one chapter. Good luck! I hoping for the best of you.

Maybe not an entire volume, but it definitely has the length of a long story. I feel very much like a pulp writer. Overall, the W saga has the typical length of a light novel. When I started, I didn't think I would write this much.

The chapter turned out extremely long. I'll definitely have to divide it. At least in two.

Thank you for the kind words. They are unexpected but very much appreciated.

 

[SRB]

Sleepy

I wrote the last word of the final act.


Now I just have to do editing and finishing touches.

Maybe not an entire volume, but it definitely has the length of a long story. I feel very much like a pulp writer. Overall, the W saga has the typical length of a light novel. When I started, I didn't think I would write this much.

The chapter turned out extremely long. I'll definitely have to divide it. At least in two.

Thank you for the kind words. They are unexpected but very much appreciated.

*pat pat*

You're doing a great job, Matcha. I can't wait to see the end of the saga and what you decided to do with our characters.

Meanwhile, I'll tell you a little secret. The name of my next chapter is "How to steal a family."

 

[SRB]

Also, @MatchaChocolate69 do you need help with any Russian parts of your chapter?

 

[MatchaChocolate69]

Sleepy

*pat pat*

You're doing a great job, Matcha. I can't wait to see the end of the saga and what you decided to do with our characters.

Meanwhile, I'll tell you a little secret. The name of my next chapter is "How to steal a family."

Thank you, Mama.
Your support is very important to me.
I hope you will like this chapter.

And I'm glad that you're also writing. I can't wait to read your chapter, to see your perspective, and the title already seems very promising! I wonder what you're cooking up for us! ?

Also, @MatchaChocolate69 do you need help with any Russian parts of your chapter?

Hmm, there are some words in Russian and maybe a few sentences. I'll need to double-check during the editing phase. Scrolling through this mega file is quite complicated. If I need help, I'll give you a shout!
Ah, is there an official translation of the Divine Comedy in Russian?

 

[SRB]

Thank you, Mama.
Your support is very important to me.
I hope you will like this chapter.

And I'm glad that you're also writing. I can't wait to read your chapter, to see your perspective, and the title already seems very promising! I wonder what you're cooking up for us! ?

Literally stealing children (you, Danny, Ssemouy, Enigma, Midnight, Pixy, Orlui).

Hmm, there are some words in Russian and maybe a few sentences. I'll need to double-check during the editing phase. Scrolling through this mega file is quite complicated. If I need help, I'll give you a shout!
Ah, is there an official translation of the Divine Comedy in Russian?

There is, wait a bit, Imma find it. It's called "Божественная Комедия" on Russian.

 

[SRB]

Thank you, Mama.
Your support is very important to me.
I hope you will like this chapter.

And I'm glad that you're also writing. I can't wait to read your chapter, to see your perspective, and the title already seems very promising! I wonder what you're cooking up for us! ?

Hmm, there are some words in Russian and maybe a few sentences. I'll need to double-check during the editing phase. Scrolling through this mega file is quite complicated. If I need help, I'll give you a shout!
Ah, is there an official translation of the Divine Comedy in Russian?

https://онлайн-читать.рф/данте-божественная-комедия/

The site is looking wonky, but it is what you need. If you want to see the book with translations, you'll need to look it up yourself, I have no idea where to start.

 

[Theirl]

UPDATE

Wow, I'm at a good point with the final chapter. Some parts have been really difficult to write.
I even managed to include Anon, who I thought I would have to cut.

Some parts made me cry. How cringe can you be to cry over what you wrote yourself?
Particularly the part with Mama and Danny. I'm too sensitive.

I just have the final part left, which will be just as difficult.

Danny's Part 99%
Azure's Part 99%
PAM'S Part 99%
Shizuki's Part 99%
Mama's Part 99%
Final Act 10%

wow keep the good work

 

[Nolff]

Spoiler: Your Mom

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Me: "Oh, boy."
Me, after looking at the picture for a moment: "Dachima Inaka, Iida Pochi slash Kadoka- HOLD UP, THESE AIN'T MANHWAS"

 

[Nolff]

UPDATE

Wow, I'm at a good point with the final chapter. Some parts have been really difficult to write.
I even managed to include Anon, who I thought I would have to cut.

Some parts made me cry. How cringe can you be to cry over what you wrote yourself?
Particularly the part with Mama and Danny. I'm too sensitive.

I just have the final part left, which will be just as difficult.

Danny's Part 99%
Azure's Part 99%
PAM'S Part 99%
Shizuki's Part 99%
Mama's Part 99%
Final Act 10%

Let me guess, I'm a cannon fodder.

 

[MatchaChocolate69]

Let me guess, I'm a cannon fodder.

Have you at least read the previous chapters?

Literally stealing children (you, Danny, Ssemouy, Enigma, Midnight, Pixy, Orlui).

The conversations in this thread are so easily misinterpreted.... let's hope the FBI never reads them. Jokes aside, now I'm even more curious.

https://онлайн-читать.рф/данте-божественная-комедия/
The site is looking wonky, but it is what you need. If you want to see the book with translations, you'll need to look it up yourself, I have no idea where to start.

Thank you, I don't know if it will be useful, but it's a great reference.

wow keep the good work

Thank you my friend, you too will have your moment in the chapter.

Also, @MatchaChocolate69 do you need help with any Russian parts of your chapter?

For the time being, I found these. Are they correct?
Дракон = Dragon
да, капитан! = Yessir! / Yes, ma'am!
кошка-женщина! = Catwoman!

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TESTING #d4af37

"Even though I walk through the darkest valley,
I will fear no evil, for you are with me;
your rod and your staff, they comfort me."

 

[Nolff]

Have you at least read the previous chapters?

Yes, I have. But, you said "

Danny's Part 99%
Azure's Part 99%
PAM'S Part 99%
Shizuki's Part 99%
Mama's Part 99%
Final Act 10% "

I don't think I exist no more, not even for a millisecond. Heck, I don't think you even wrote 0.0000000000000001% part with me in it.

 

[Nolff]

I have been forgotten...

But... FEAR NOT!

AS I AM IN 2K MILESTONE IN A CHAP OF SHHS!

 

[SRB]

The conversations in this thread are so easily misinterpreted.... let's hope the FBI never reads them. Jokes aside, now I'm even more curious.

Ehehe~

Thank you, I don't know if it will be useful, but it's a great reference.

?

For the time being, I found these. Are they correct?
Дракон = Dragon

Gud

да, капитан! = Yessir! / Yes, ma'am!

That's more of a Yes, Captan. Considering you probably use it to talk about Shizuki and/or Ssemouy, that fits. You can also use a more literal translation:
Yessir! = Да, Сэр!
Yes, ma'am! = Да, Мэм!

кошка-женщина! = Catwoman!

I would remove the hyphen- hy- hup-
...
Just write кошкоженщина. Seems better, or you can use Кошкодевочка, if you're talking about someone younger.

 

[Deleted member 146224]

Кошкодевочка

This sounds adorable

 

[Pixytokisaki14]

The conversations in this thread are so easily misinterpreted.... let's hope the FBI never reads them. Jokes aside, now I'm even more curious.

Weee wooo weee wooo weee wooo