Do tell me if details are being contradicted, those thing aren't supposed to happen
, unless Heroine shenanigans are abound.
Impossible, my queen never contradicts herself, and if it seems so, it's surely part of her grand plans that my limited mind is not able to see. Contradiction is the wrong term; I used it improperly.
It's a cat (Why do they not have the cat blobs in SHF?
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This drives me crazy; it doesn't make any logical sense. There are emojis on the website that are missing on the forum and vice versa. It makes no sense. Maybe I should open a request in the appropriate section... but I'm lazy.
Cat, huh? Now I remember. It makes sense; I think it suits you. Besides, cats have an instinct and almost supernatural sixth sense, which could be a superpower comparable to spider senses. The lore is fixed. See? Everything fits into your grand plan.
*brings his hand closer to her head, hoping not to get scratched*
*pets her head*
I'd rather not be associated with spiders... especially widowed spiders... I prefer you very much alive.
You don't know how much your words warm my heart.
To be honest I have trouble keeping up with my setting too >_>, I come across one bit of information and then suddenly a lot of things don't make sense so I have to rework it. The world has a lot of influence from the days where I was obsessed with powerscaling, but now I sort of realize how utterly pointless it is when you're dealing with abstract concepts that everyone has a different idea of. So I've decided it would be a great underlying theme for everything - to the point where some characters are in a position where they question if anything in the world truly exists aside from themself.
A sincere piece of advice I can give is that a world that is too perfect sounds unreal (unless that is your goal, of course). I mean, it's okay for some things to be contradictory or not make sense. In my opinion, this makes them believable and understandable to a human mind, which is ultimately the recipient, the reader who needs to grasp it. Imperfection is an element not to be underestimated when trying to recreate a reality; after all, our own reality is perfect in its imperfections. Then there's another discussion that imperfection also depends on the point of view (is a tumor an imperfection or a refined perfect self-defense system of the universe?). But at some point, we have to choose a point of view. We can't always remain external observers as if things didn't concern us.
We've gone from 3rd rate villain and minion to extradimensional threats
This could be one of the possible endings of the CURSED TIMELINE. A happy ending that would be nice to read more about. Maybe, who knows.
Wow, you're probably the first person who asked that. Everyone elses asks how to
speed up the battle animations
. Though I guess it's because during season 1 people were complaining about the animations lengthening their MD runs, so recent IDs are a lot faster. Unfortunately, there's no way to do so, but there's a pause button beside the menu to stop the animations completely.
Thanks, even though it's inconvenient, I can use the pause function. It also works with the space bar on PC, which simplifies things.
I'm at 2-11, and the Jackpot scene made me laugh, really funny. What a crazy bunch the Sinners are, and Dante is tragicomic in his incompetence and inability to oppose events. Don is as adorable as ever, Ryoshu zero ducks given as usual.
I really like how Faust approaches things.
Poor Saude.
Write some scenes outside of the actual singing. Arguing over which song to pick, food and drinks if we brought any, everyone witch hunting the one person who does not want to sing(totally not speaking from personal experience here) and some random shenanigans that you feel are appropriate for the situation.
It's in cases like these that having a high resistance to cringe comes in handy. You have to sing at the top of your lungs, burst the eardrums of those who dragged you there, and put in all the emphasis possible. "You asked for it! Let's see how much you're ready to endure! It will be the "best" performance of my life!" (Alcohol helps in these situations). But aside from that, your advice is useful, thanks!
"Space is big.", a hundred ships are already nothing compared to the earth's oceans, even if they were all American Supercarriers, let alone the vastness of space. The scale of the battle is described as the entire solar system... I don't know the exact tonnage, but based on the pictures of Shizuki's capital ships, even if the battle is solely in Earth's orbit(or whatever it is in SH), each ship could have millions of kilometers of breathing room.
I don't really think it's a problem, sci-fis don't really care about getting the scale right. I doubt anyone reading SHHS but me cares.
The capital ships and space carriers should be around 20 km in length, with an estimated weight of billions of tons. They are effectively space cities, and traveling from one end to the other takes quite some time. Although space is immense, they still remain colossal to me.
Based on my Google research, the largest naval battle of all time is considered the Battle of Leyte Gulf in 1944, which involved around 300 ships.
I imagine it's correct to at least triple the number of spaceships I envisioned, if not increase it tenfold.
Fortunately, I didn't specify an exact number in the text.
[Hmph. If I were in charge of the alliance's strategy, I wouldn't even bother building up a space fleet, as that is a privilege afforded to those with resources. At worst, I would merely use a few ships to lure them into a more advantageous position. It's better to fight from another planet, or even the moon, if it is available. Static installations are much less-resource intensive than ships, and we can allocate more funds to pure firepower. Of course, that is only useful if they dare to come to us, as for our attacking force...
Of course, the alliance is doomed to fail at this point with such little resources, but at least it wouldn't fall into disgrace so early on.]
If only they had your brilliant and strategic mind to prepare the resistance. Surely many mistakes would have been avoided, especially since being a democracy, or rather a coalition, unfortunately, every ally wants to have their say to maintain their support for the alliance, a precarious balance of egos in which Shizuki played a fundamental role given the technology and logistics she possessed. The nekomimi wanted to face the enemies as she had in her past, through direct confrontation in an epic naval battle. The cat girl lacks the subtleties of a more cunning war, which, if you had been there, could have been implemented thanks to your manipulative abilities. The strategy implemented is probably suicidal, but perhaps W had foreseen this considering that the real goal is to reduce the numbers of the Eldritch and lure them to the Moon. The TSUKI plan: we’ll see if it works.
Autonomous drones are the future of warfare! You have two hyper-advanced Ais on your side, and their abilities are squandered on doing jobs that humans can. Create millions of tiny drones, akin to needles, a few carrying payloads of anti-eldritch munitions for strategic targets, and employ the oldest trick in naval combat - ramming! Launch them all at once at ultra-high speeds towards the heart of the enemy, and watch as their defenses are hewn apart by a thousand cuts. It is then where we shall be as dark and impenetrable as the night, and fall like a thunder.
Of course, the alliance is doomed to fail at this point with such little resources, but at least it wouldn't fall into disgrace so early on.]
Yeah. A war with robots might have made more sense. The brutal efficiency of machines could have been employed in a more ruthless and lethal manner. The choice was between them and the clones, and perhaps clones are easier to produce thanks to Danny's DNA in the form of zombie daikons. But aside from this, organic life makes the war more real, more raw. More felt. Only through the suffering and struggle for survival of a living being can we make the conflict felt, authentic, and relatable. Only by paying the price with blood can we give value to a war. Without it, it’s nothing but a game, where plastic pawns are sacrificed on a chessboard. But I imagine from your point of view, this conflict seems just like that.
OOC: I'm not actually telling you to change anything, keep doing what you're doing, what you've written has its own charm.
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I'll take that as a compliment, and it makes me feel like I'm on cloud nine. Thank you!
