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MidnightFox

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Wait hol- What???

So...

You're telling me that, me handing a little girl to her parents counts as pedophilia and me looking for enlightenment after asking her some tips counts as molesting and me procrastinating in a room for 5 days counts as being arrested?



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MatchaChocolate69

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I've never really had that issue. I consider every character I write to be a part of myself. If they go against the original plan, it's because it never really lined up with my intentions to begin with. So I rethink the plot. Even if their actions go against the outline, it's because I decided so.
This is one of the many reasons why you are a better writer than me: I lack your planning. If I had it, I would certainly be more consistent in my storytelling, avoid certain mistakes, and maintain a more coherent logical thread. Additionally, it would help me avoid the blocks caused by certain situations I get myself into. I should try to learn from you.

My vision is different, surely there's a part of me in my characters, but it's as if they are other unknown people performing on stage using the technique of improvisational theatre. In my philosophy, although I'm not orthodox in this, the character comes before the plot, and the story forms based on their actions.
Both of us are aware of it, but that never came up because it was about the steam engine being used on an industrial scale. In fact, that point was used against me lol.
A fairly widespread theory is that the Roman Empire could have developed steam technology machines on an industrial scale, but this technological progress did not occur because there was an abundance of slaves and no need to reduce labor costs. It is known that they had advanced hydraulic systems and boilers to heat their baths.
With the fall of the empire, the socio-political conditions and stability necessary for such progress were obviously lacking. Advancement became extremely slower until the Renaissance with the emergence of geniuses like Leonardo da Vinci, who were probably too far ahead of their time.
I prefer Korean, :blob_uwu:played Genshin with that language on
It's definitely a choice well-suited to your lore. :blob_evil: Big brother will be pleased!
By the way, you should put in a good word for me with him... :blob_sweat:

PhilipClair is the most important one. The EGOs... the rate-up is a lie, and I mean that in a literal sense, they are only added to the pool, you don't actually have a higher chance of getting them compared to other ones. So no matter how hot Ishmael in a jumpsuit is... you may not get her.

The announcers are basically fanservice.

By the way, here's my friend code: E359768592, just tell me if you don't know how to add me using it yet :blob_sweat:
I was under the impression that all the sinners were literary characters, but I can't figure out who this Philip Sinclair is. It must be a book I'm not familiar with. I still need to understand the difference between EGO and identity.

Also, I still need to figure out which characters I like. So far, Virgil has made a great impression on me, but I don't think he can be used since he's not a sinner, but the guide. Oh yes, I naturally like Don Quixote given the character she represents. Faust also appeals to me, but mostly because of how she is represented and her way of speaking.

Anyway, I've added you to the (sigh) friend list.
Honestly, if you compare it to other visual novels it's already one of the best even if the story isn't over yet.
For me, it's too early to judge, but the level seems high. And then I love the theme of the descent into hell.
That's pretty much it, yes. A part of their soul is burned up and given a dream, that, from a subjective viewpoint, lasts forever. It's euthanasia but for an advanced civilization.
Would you choose this option if you had it?
 
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Yay~
*rubs ears*
*happy Daikat noises*
:blob_melt: more more :blob_reach:
*happy purring*
:blob_melt:

Also Fu Xuan rerunning and Firefly coming right after is giving me a massive dilemma, because I want both but can pull only for one :blob_teary:
 

Azure_Fog

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*happy Daikat noises*
:blob_melt: more more :blob_reach:
*happy purring*
:blob_melt:
Hehe~ cute~
Also Fu Xuan rerunning and Firefly coming right after is giving me a massive dilemma, because I want both but can pull only for one :blob_teary:
Fu Xuan is great but you don’t necessarily need her. She does give a 10% CR buff, cleanse, and tanking for the whole party, but you have Bailu already which should be enough for basically everything. You do need a second sustain if you care about MoC/PF, but Lynx, Gepard, and Gallagher can fulfill that. And there’s also just the option of kill the enemy before they kill you…

Anyways, Fu Xuan is nice QoL from my limited experience, but you don’t necessarily need her.

As for Firefly, she’s a DPS. Do you need another? if I recall correctly, you have both Acheron and Jingliu which can clear everything in the game already through pure brute force because they are just that broken.

Anyways, Firefly is great of you want another DPS.

Or you could just pull for Firefly. Why? Because she’s Firefly~
(Pull for who you want. Anyone can clear with enough investment and that’s assuming you care about the endgame in the first place.)
 
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Hehe~ cute~
You are cute~ :blob_melt: and so amazing~ :blob_melt: and so strong~ :blob_melt: and precious~ :blob_melt: This Daikon likes very munch :blob_uwu:
Fu Xuan is great but you don’t necessarily need her. She does give a 10% CR buff, cleanse, and tanking for the whole party, but you have Bailu already which should be enough for basically everything. You do need a second sustain if you care about MoC/PF, but Lynx, Gepard, and Gallagher can fulfill that. And there’s also just the option of kill the enemy before they kill you…

Anyways, Fu Xuan is nice QoL from my limited experience, but you don’t necessarily need her.

As for Firefly, she’s a DPS. Do you need another? if I recall correctly, you have both Acheron and Jingliu which can clear everything in the game already through pure brute force because they are just that broken.

Anyways, Firefly is great of you want another DPS.

Or you could just pull for Firefly. Why? Because she’s Firefly~
(Pull for who you want. Anyone can clear with enough investment and that’s assuming you care about the endgame in the first place.)
This is basically my thinking too :blob_aww: I started building Lynx too, so second team has someone already for sustain too. For DPS yeah, both Acheron and Jingliu is basically all the soul can desire, but is there even such a thing as too many DPS? :blob_evil: (rhetorical question. Clearly there isn't :blob_evil: )

Plus I really want Firefly, because Firefly and well that's an argument on it's own :blob_evil:

Thank you, for helping me make a decision :blob_uwu: You advice is invaluable as always :blob_uwu:
 

Azure_Fog

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SsemouyOnan

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The trilogy is complete! :blob_paint:
Instead of writing the new chapter, I'm inspired to write songs just for @SsemouyOnan
Good good, :blob_evil: huhu, gives me time to catch up on writing my own chapters (I can't even write this weekend...)
In my defense, we're talking about at least three personalities. :blob_pout:
But on the other hand, Heroine is the one who has received the least love, and it's only right that she be celebrated too. :blob_evil:
Harems must be taken seriously!

Indeed, jokes aside, I'm really satisfied with this track. From my perspective, I think I've truly captured the vibe of Heroine.
It's the song that took the longest to write and produce, but it's a result that stands out distinctly from Ssemouy and Seymour.
I'm glad that each has its own personality represented, yet they all have a strong connection.
For this reason, in the song trilogy, there are references to each other in the lyrics.
Perhaps Ssemouy has a different view of Heroine, but I am very pleased with the lyrics, especially the chorus and the bridge.

Three of a Kind of Queens (Trilogy)
♠️Killer Queen ?Song
♥️Villainess' Declaration?Song
?Serendipity's Folly ?Song

Serendipity's Folly??

Picture by Ane-san ?

LYRICS

[Verse 1]
Sweet child’s laugh, logic fades, a fractal Queen plays,
Heroine of contradictions, from zero to infinity sways.
Lovely and kind, move warily, she can't stand the bugs
Only she can be a glorious error, don't you want her hugs?

[Verse 2]
From nothing, destinies glance, mirror’s crack, paths enhance,
Zero’s herald, playing a forbidden game, the very laws dance
Such a graceful maid, Where she walks, the boundaries lean.
Glimpse the unseen, Can you see beyond the teapot’s steam?

[Bridge]
Would you like a drink? From teapot, both tea and coffee flow,
Sugar? Choose matcha or milk, but beware, it's sour, you know.
An eerie smile, did the table shrink, or did she get closer?
Love-crazed gaze digs into you, useless to maintain composure.

[Chorus]
Lucky, in this Greedy unfair gacha game with a zero chance
SSS+ like Ssemouy you pulled the best, a yandere’s glance! (lu-li-la)
Serendipity's folly, You should eat a fortune cookie today,
You really should, it will say "Happy news is on its way". (lu-lu-la)

[Verse 3]
In her chocolate castle, she dreams her prince charming
A naïve heroine, "Even villains deserve an happy ending!"
But in Queendom of impossibility, for foes that come due,
and glitches, 100% Chance, They meet the fate of her Mary Sue.

[Bridge]
Would you like a drink? From teapot, both tea and coffee flow,
Sugar? Choose matcha or milk, but beware, it's sour, you know.
An eerie smile, did the table shrink, or did she get closer?
Love-crazed gaze digs into you, useless to maintain composure.

[Chorus]
Lucky, in this Greedy unfair gacha game with a zero chance
SSS+ like Ssemouy you pulled the best, a yandere’s glance! (lu-li-la)
Serendipity's folly, You should eat a fortune cookie today,
You really should, it will say "Happy news is on its way". (lu-lu-la)

[Verse 3]
In her chocolate castle, she dreams her prince charming
A naïve heroine, "Even villains deserve an happy ending!"
But in Queendom of impossibility, for foes that come due,
and glitches, 100% Chance, They meet the fate of her Mary Sue.

[Bridge]
Would you like a drink? From teapot, both tea and coffee flow,
Sugar? Choose matcha or milk, but beware, it's sour, you know.
An eerie smile, did the table shrink, or did she get closer?
Love-crazed gaze digs into you, useless to maintain composure.

[Chorus]
Lucky, in this Greedy unfair gacha game with a zero chance
SSS+ like Ssemouy you pulled the best, a yandere’s glance!
Serendipity's folly, You should eat a fortune cookie today,
You really should, it will say "Happy news is on its way". (lu-lu-la)

[Instrumental Fade]

[END]
This one is my favorite. No need to elaborate. It reminds me of vocaloid songs.
This is one of the many reasons why you are a better writer than me: I lack your planning. If I had it, I would certainly be more consistent in my storytelling, avoid certain mistakes, and maintain a more coherent logical thread. Additionally, it would help me avoid the blocks caused by certain situations I get myself into. I should try to learn from you.

My vision is different, surely there's a part of me in my characters, but it's as if they are other unknown people performing on stage using the technique of improvisational theatre. In my philosophy, although I'm not orthodox in this, the character comes before the plot, and the story forms based on their actions.
The good part is you can actually get the writing part done without fretting over the planning and worldbuilding. It's painful to make an outline only to have it outdated in a couple weeks because you've changed your mind on everything. At least if you've already taken the effort to write everything out, your mind is actually set on things and you can consistently get chapters out.

I think nowadays webnovels are mostly character-driven rather than story-driven, so I wouldn't exactly call your style unorthodox.
It's definitely a choice well-suited to your lore. :blob_evil: Big brother will be pleased!
By the way, you should put in a good word for me with him... :blob_sweat:
I will, I will, don't worry, you and 3 generations of your family will be excluded from the blast radius of the biological and chemical attacks. :blob_uwu:
I was under the impression that all the sinners were literary characters, but I can't figure out who this Philip Sinclair is. It must be a book I'm not familiar with. I still need to understand the difference between EGO and identity.
They all are, Sinclair is based on Emil Sinclair from "Demian". The one on the banner is his ID, Dawn Office Sinclair. We call him Philipclair because he's based on a character from Project Moon's previous game, Philip, a fixer from the Dawn Office who's a fan favorite. Walpurgisnacht is basically a fanservice event, think of it as the game's equivalent of a beach episode XD

I think the game and Dante's notes does good job of explaining the difference. But an Identity is a possible path the sinner could have taken in life to end up as "somebody else", using Mirror Technology, you basically make a sinner "wear" it to become them partially and gain access to their combat experience and skills momentarily. So for example, Shi Association 5 Ishmael is an Ishmael who happened to join the Shi Association instead of Limbus Company.

EGO is different, there's many different types of EGO, but the one Limbus Company uses only works momentarily by resonating with an Abnormality(basically a monster made out of human emotions). If your Sanity is too low, you get taken over by the thoughts and emotions of the Abnormality. IDs are semi-permanent, while EGOs only work momentarily. The sole exception to this is the EGOs you start out with, you'll understand why later on.

From a mechanic standpoint, ID is the "skills", EGO is an "ultimate attack"
Also, I still need to figure out which characters I like. So far, Virgil has made a great impression on me, but I don't think he can be used since he's not a sinner, but the guide. Oh yes, I naturally like Don Quixote given the character she represents. Faust also appeals to me, but mostly because of how she is represented and her way of speaking.
Virgilius too OP to be playable. :blob_sweat: Don and Faust are indeed nice. But I think you can tell who are my favorites based on my support IDs

Anyway, I've added you to the (sigh) friend list.

For me, it's too early to judge, but the level seems high. And then I love the theme of the descent into hell.

Would you choose this option if you had it?
As it is in my lore? No, because humans have reached a point in their technology where they've become god-like entities short of being literally omnipotent. While the option would give me more freedom, I don't think I need THAT much. Having eternal life alone is enough for me.

If the option was somehow offered to me as a modern human? I would still reject it unless I'm already about to die anyways.
 
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