Sexual writing?

[Heartlock]

Can someone please give me tips on how to write sex scenes, I love nsfw and smutty novels. Thought I’d write one, but the reality is I haven’t a clue what I’m doing when it comes to writing sex scenes. Any help would be of great help

 

[LuoirM]

Can someone please give me tips on how to write sex scenes, I love nsfw and smutty novels. Thought I’d write one, but the reality is I haven’t a clue what I’m doing when it comes to writing sex scenes. Any help would be of great help

As a realistic and comedy sex writer, here's my one advice

You have to realize what type of sex you love when you mentioned "NSFW and smutty novels", is it just pure "plap plap moan for me you bitch" type of sex or is it some teenager highschooler first timer sex that "It was me Peter..."?

Because upon writing either one of the two, the way you would structure the sentences and the atmosphere is very difference, for the former; you would describe it very violently with more actions and more determined physical interaction, with maybe sentences like "the moans echoes through the room" while the more spiritual connection sex would be more symbolic like "our breaths entangled for the first time since the dawn of time." and vice versa.

And do you like it to be like real life sex where you'd have trouble putting it in because you don't know which of the 3 woman's hole it is, but when you finally figured it out you're already stressed out of your mind and your balls swelled up and ur dick flaccid, or fantasy sex where everything is perfect and it's just pure actasy and having fun.

Also, this.

The Ultimate Guide to Writing Smut Fic - QuinnAnderson - Original Work [Archive of Our Own]

An Archive of Our Own, a project of the Organization for Transformative Works

archiveofourown.org

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One more thing, read the smut novel you enjoyed, see what they did, did they describe the butthole in detail, did they OOC the character just for the sake of getting the reader horny? I know a lot did, but it worked, so if it worked for them, don't be shy for you.

 

[TheEldritchGod]

Are you serious?
You REALLY want to get good at this?
Are you SURE?
Okay...
Like all things, it takes WORK. Practice, Practice, and more practice.

So, the question is, where can you go to practice, what is basically Sexting?

Ahem...

Spoiler: Don't say I didn't warn you...

shangrilamux.com 9999

Learn how to Telnet and go there. Figure out how to MUSH code, make a character, then... use the BBoards and go hang out with the professional sexting community.

My advice?
DON'T.
But... if you really want to become good at smut, no better way than to get tossed into the deep end of the swimming pool.

 

[LuoirM]

w

Are you serious?
You REALLY want to get good at this?
Are you SURE?
Okay...
Like all things, it takes WORK. Practice, Practice, and more practice.

So, the question is, where can you go to practice, what is basically Sexting?

Ahem...

Spoiler: Don't say I didn't warn you...

shangrilamux.com 9999

Learn how to Telnet and go there. Figure out how to MUSH code, make a character, then... use the BBoards and go hang out with the professional sexting community.

My advice?
DON'T.
But... if you really want to become good at smut, no better way than to get tossed into the deep end of the swimming pool.

what is that website

 

[7w1]

Just start writing really. It's what I did and I think it worked out okay...
Copy a scene you loved, put your own characters in there, figure out what you struggle with, then focus on refining that. Its all about repetition. If you follow guides too closely you'll end up with something boring and generic that isn't you, so just try to write, get feedback from someone else or yourself, then write again.
If things get to repetitive or your stuck with something specific, like trying to find a good description or synonym, then visit that ao3 page LuoirM linked and read through that for some inspiration.

 

[Notadate]

Breaking down sexual style

 

[RepresentingCaution]

Get firsthand experience, but definitely use protection.

 

[TheEldritchGod]

w

what is that website

It is not a website.
It is a TELNET address for a MUX.
MultiUser eXperience.
Text only RP site for the single most depraved site on the internet. Been going for decades now. Hundreds of users daily.

Shang will never die.
Not while there are text based perverts out there.

Here's what you do with Shang.

Lets say you are trying to write a soft-core porn and your editor is on your ass. Well, you pop on Shang and check the RP IC request boards. Somewhere in the dozens of requests are a few twisted ideas that will make your readers go, "Shouldn't you be on some sort of government watch list?"

Then you go RP that request, making sure to screen capture. A few hours later, and with your sanity in tatters, you got a scene.

Then just change the names, flip a few things around, and Whammo. Porn nobody has ever seen before.
Because NOBODY is as fucked up as shang.

You wanna RP a Centaur with two dicks who likes to rape muppets? There's someone willing to RP with you.

And since it's text only, it makes it super easy, especially these days with AI editors, to just change a few things around and you got yourself something to make your readers go, "I think I need a shower."

These guys are the experts of Text based smut.
Nobody beats shang.

Welcome to the dark web.
Oh. In case you just wanna go check it out.
I usually just turn on Terminal. When you get your computer's command prompt, use Telnet (The address) (The number) and it should connect you. it's an old and mostly forgotten protocol. Some PC users might not have access anymore and you might have to download a client program but they should be free.

Then when you connect type WHO

Then connect Guest Guest

Then flail about as you try to navigate MUSH code, but that's on you. If you P (a name off the WHO list)= (Type something) that's how you page someone. Ask someone who looks like an Admin if they can help.

Lots of people will love to help.
LOVE to help.
They LOVE newbies.
LOVE...
Newbies.

 

[ArugonW]

Get firsthand experience, but definitely use protection.

I will not pass this first step??

 

[Heartlock]

Get firsthand experience, but definitely use protection.

I’m no virgin, I’m just curious how to format it cuz I tend to focus more of the emotions than the actual act of propagating lol

 

[BetterNickPending]

It is not a website.
It is a TELNET address for a MUX.
MultiUser eXperience.
Text only RP site for the single most depraved site on the internet. Been going for decades now. Hundreds of users daily.

Shang will never die.
Not while there are text based perverts out there.

Here's what you do with Shang.

Lets say you are trying to write a soft-core porn and your editor is on your ass. Well, you pop on Shang and check the RP IC request boards. Somewhere in the dozens of requests are a few twisted ideas that will make your readers go, "Shouldn't you be on some sort of government watch list?"

Then you go RP that request, making sure to screen capture. A few hours later, and with your sanity in tatters, you got a scene.

Then just change the names, flip a few things around, and Whammo. Porn nobody has ever seen before.
Because NOBODY is as fucked up as shang.

You wanna RP a Centaur with two dicks who likes to rape muppets? There's someone willing to RP with you.

And since it's text only, it makes it super easy, especially these days with AI editors, to just change a few things around and you got yourself something to make your readers go, "I think I need a shower."

These guys are the experts of Text based smut.
Nobody beats shang.

Welcome to the dark web.
Oh. In case you just wanna go check it out.
I usually just turn on Terminal. When you get your computer's command prompt, use Telnet (The address) (The number) and it should connect you. it's an old and mostly forgotten protocol. Some PC users might not have access anymore and you might have to download a client program but they should be free.

Then when you connect type WHO

Then connect Guest Guest

Then flail about as you try to navigate MUSH code, but that's on you. If you P (a name off the WHO list)= (Type something) that's how you page someone. Ask someone who looks like an Admin if they can help.

Lots of people will love to help.
LOVE to help.
They LOVE newbies.
LOVE...
Newbies.

Do you have a more detailed tutorial? (preferaby in format of YT video)
You describe some new SiFi technology and I got lost...

 

[TheEldritchGod]

Do you have a more detailed tutorial? (preferaby in format of YT video)
You describe some new SiFi technology and I got lost...

Blink.
Telnet is to http what ham radio is to a cell phone

My God. Kids these days. You d0nt even know how to access the dark web.

All these shady sites are buried in obscure corners of the internet using shit that's been around for 30 years.

But because they created internet browsers, none of you kids can get to this shit because opening up a command prompt is beyond you.

When I was a kid, we hacked shit and hand coded. Up hill. Both ways. In a blizzard.

But seriously. Telnet is a forgotten protocol and it's where you can find the really spooky shit. I don't recommend it.

Just Google Telnet browser. I do it the hard way because I hate filters. Yeah, you lose the color shading, but I like my info access raw.

 

[LuoirM]

Blink.
Telnet is to http what ham radio is to a cell phone

My God. Kids these days. You d0nt even know how to access the dark web.

All these shady sites are buried in obscure corners of the internet using shit that's been around for 30 years.

But because they created internet browsers, none of you kids can get to this shit because opening up a command prompt is beyond you.

When I was a kid, we hacked shit and hand coded. Up hill. Both ways. In a blizzard.

But seriously. Telnet is a forgotten protocol and it's where you can find the really spooky shit. I don't recommend it.

Just Google Telnet browser. I do it the hard way because I hate filters. Yeah, you lose the color shading, but I like my info access raw.

I'm sorry daddy

 

[TheEldritchGod]

I'm sorry daddy

Don't be weird.
I get stranger things than you in my breakfast cereal.

 

[LuoirM]

Don't be weird.
I get stranger things than you in my breakfast cereal.

Walmart offbrand?

 

[dummycake]

couldn't help but notice that you also posted about how to write a father character... is that related?

 

[LuoirM]

couldn't help but notice that you also posted about how to write a father character... is that related?

....

 

[dummycake]

....

what? it's true.

 

[BetterNickPending]

Just Google Telnet browser. I do it the hard way because I hate filters. Yeah, you lose the color shading,

Wait if I use "Google Telnet Browser" I will have it without colours?
Like those black and white movies from middle ages?

Please Daddy teach me how to view this stuff in 4k 32bit colour.