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Euphridia

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It's a novice tongue in cheek comedic satire about a serialized webnovel being published as a webnovel that makes me happy to write since I can poke fun at isekai tropes while still showing that I still love them anyway?
(Yes. that makes it all clear now.)
 

Alyxx

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Have you ever thought what would happen if the Monkey King was sent to another world?

Yeah that's my story
 

3guanoff

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Lobster, Paper, Scissors. It's not the worst thing I've written and it keeps me sober. Give it a try if you are suffering from insomnia. There's only six chapters, but it will definitely help you fall asleep.
 

ACertainPassingUser

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Altough it's still a draft, it has :
-> Proper Beginning and the End
-> Realistic Worldbuilding
-> Heavy action despite being slice-of-life
-> MC isn't Overpowered Mary Sue/Gary Stu
-> MC still have good brain on their head despite average power
-> MC still becomes jobless from time to time despite the prowess and ability, after choosing into the wrong school and subject.
-> Realistic interpretation of Flag and Tropes
-> Non-Evil Church
-> Proper dating experience between isekaied transmigrator and local medieval magicworld people
-> Proper showing of aftereffect, consequences, and post-event development after anything significant happened.
-> The story still continues when MC becomes old man
-> There's a Mary Sue MC cameo in the story
 
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