Review Request: Son of the Spirit Beast

[NagatoSaitou]

Hi all, I am currently writing a xianxia/xuanhuan cultivation story. Although it is a cultivation story, it differs in a lot of aspects from your standard cultivation story. The power system is more polished and doesn't include thousands and thousands of Laws but focuses just on a specific number. Even though there are some typical cliches of the genre, the story isn't an endless repetition cycle of the same things. The MC is strong but not op, the power system itself serves as a deterrent to avoid such a thing.

I would love it if anyone could read and review it.

Ps: My novel can a bit slow regarding the pace at the beginning for the first 10 chapters, I am aware of that. However, I ask you to continue. The slow pace serves as a base for the MC character and behavior. (Link to my novel is in the title novel below)

Son of the Spirit Beast


Synopsis

Rainbow Island, one of the several islands in this world governed by martial artists, is the stage of an incredible event. A newborn infant, Hei, is saved from a tragic ending and raised by a spirit beast spider. Under these unusual circumstances, Hei ends growing up with the body of a human but the mind of a spirit beast. However, this world is filled with conflicts, and his vision about spirit beast differs by the rest of the world. So, in order to protect his family, he decides to become a martial artist, beginning a journey that would bring him toward the peak of martial artist society while discovering the concealed story of the world.​

Son of the Spirit Beast​