Review on synopsis

[Mr.Brewer]

I really need someone to review my synopsis and tell me what they think from a readers perspective ?

Is it good or it lacks something.

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1106952/the-last-of-the-wizards/

 

[Satan03]

It seems good ?

 

[Tempokai]

Synopsis looks good, but is somewhat vague and trope ridden if you look closely. Sure, looks somewhat unique, but the uniqueness is hidden in the "chosen one on the journey on self discovery" slop which is overdone without uniqueness. I would've read it if the "threat of death" was more coherent, at least the name of whomever they're running from and what's the role of Tony and Bell here. Are they parent figure or mentor figure? With current wording it's hard to understand