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EdwinLovato

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I'll close this week art drill with Janett the Dragon Slayer.

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EdwinLovato said:
Guys, i want to challenge myself. I open request to any action scenes you want, with maximum 2 scenes.

If your story or ideas want to be visualize, you can share here. It's free, i just want to challenge myself to sketch better. I will draw it manually as usual.
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Can you draw a follow up to this art work of mine? I am curious to see what you can come up with. 👀
EdwinLovato said:
I'll close this week art drill with Janett the Dragon Slayer.

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Shee I was late.
 
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Getting better every day.

Also, I was writing this small paragraph, giving some real critique for once, pointing out that you gave the female martial artist the manliest fingers and her nails/fingers could use some slight adjustment, only for you to post a new image with the issue fixed. So obviously you noticed it on your own, or just wanted her to have manly fingers.

Honestly, though, the pose and hair are cool, but she should have eyes.

The only way you wouldn't see her eyes would be if you added more darkness/shadow.
 
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FRWriter said:
Getting better every day.

Also, I was writing this small paragraph, giving some real critique for once, pointing out that you gave the female martial artist the manliest fingers and her nails/fingers could use some slight adjustment, only for you to post a new image with the issue fixed. So obviously you noticed it on your own, or just wanted her to have manly fingers.

Honestly, though, the pose and hair are cool, but she should have eyes.

The only way you wouldn't see her eyes would be if you added more darkness/shadow.
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You guess it right, I actually have hard time draw woman figure and faces, hahaha.

I tried redraw whole picture too actually, since I found the body composition not right too. So I changed the pose a little, fixed the chest area and fixed the hair and clothes drop.

It took me hours just to draw this eyes. hahaha

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EdwinLovato said:
You guess it right, I actually have hard time draw woman figure and faces, hahaha.

I tried redraw whole picture too actually, since I found the body composition not right too. So I changed the pose a little, fixed the chest area and fixed the hair and clothes drop.

It took me hours just to draw this eyes. hahaha

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While it took you hours, I think nobody can say anything bad about the final results.

Really impressive and VERY realistic. Looks incredible.

Though the eyebrows are a little thicc for my taste, to be perfectly honest. Just minor issues, though, and also not really a mistake, but just a matter of style and personal preference.
 
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FRWriter said:
While it took you hours, I think nobody can say anything bad about the final results.

Really impressive and VERY realistic. Looks incredible.

Though the eyebrows are a little thicc for my taste, to be perfectly honest. Just minor issues, though, and also not really a mistake, but just a matter of style and personal preference.
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Can't be helped, I'm using my girl eyebrows and eyes as references :ROFLMAO:
I need to start looking for females manwha/manga characters too.
 
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