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some imaginative descriptions i found in a novel
Semi-wavy, of long length and simply enchanting Carmine red hair down to her also enchanting, charming, and seductive hips. Childbearing, top-notch, of course. As she jolted her head unbelievably at being peeped at, her black-coffee eyes were revealed and her creamy beige skin with freckles here and there that were still visible through her somewhat wet clothes turned Ciemnosc into a retard; a manly retard.
A pair of huge, gigantic, perky teardrop-shaped wonders of life bubbled about a little as she sat down on a rock that was behind her as soon as she turned around and faced Ciemnosc, she finished putting on her pants, rolled them up, and began placing some damnly unnecessary tights up her feet.
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As for her precious bottom, it was too authentically attractive with its upper section being very freckled on and the rest of them cheeks only slightly so that only when a few tens of seconds went by, Ciemnosc finally realized that it was a tush even greater, bouncier than his Sister and, alright, much more memorable and feminine than his Mother’s; cough.
 

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I feel this on an extremely personal level. Writing scene descriptions is very difficult and frustrating but over time it becomes a bit easier. This is not because it actually is but because you have felt the pain of editing for thousands of hours trying to describe every detail of the story in painstakingly frustration and never wanted to experience it again. The dread keeps you on your toes, not skipping over as much as possible in order to prevent laters soulless work.
 

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some imaginative descriptions i found in a novel


and finally
Shouldn't you put tights on before the pants?

... Also, the rest makes me realize why so many people complain about 'too much description in stories'. Is it AI generated?
It seems almost good (in a creative use of language way), but then it does things that make me cringe hard.

Lastly... If it's not AI generated, did CupcakeNinja write it?
I have the opposite problem.
Same. To the point where I didn't have dialogue in like... The first twenty chapters.
 

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Shouldn't you put tights on before the pants?

... Also, the rest makes me realize why so many people complain about 'too much description in stories'. Is it AI generated?
It seems almost good (in a creative use of language way), but then it does things that make me cringe hard.

Lastly... If it's not AI generated, did CupcakeNinja write it?

Same. To the point where I didn't have dialogue in like... The first twenty chapters.
no cupcake writing is very different. it's also much better than this.

this is a buried harem novel with 20 average views per chapter. it might be ai? but i don't think so. this is a work passion
 
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