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NikkuNii

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Do you readers like swear words in your novel. In your opinion, does that make the novel have more wit?
 

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Depends on how it is used.
Excessive swearing just because the author isn't creative enough to use other words can get pretty boring and repetitive.
I don't need to read a work with "fuck" in every other sentence. There is a fine line between cheap and witty-profane writing. It's a bit like socializing, it has to fit the occasion/scenario. Otherwise, it's just distracting.

It also depends on character for me. You can't make a goody-two-shoes swear like a drunk 40y/o alcoholic in his mid-life crisis.
 

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Do you readers like swear words in your novel. In your opinion, does that make the novel have more wit?
Can get annoying easily. Most characters are fine if they swear a little, for example, it is normal/understandable to swear when you get hurt. If it fits the character e.g. a sailor or something, then cussing is a must obviously.
But I don't know why swear words would be witty. :blob_neutral:
 

NikkuNii

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Can get annoying easily. Most characters are fine if they swear a little, for example, it is normal/understandable to swear when you get hurt. If it fits the character e.g. a sailor or something, then cussing is a must obviously.
But I don't know why swear words would be witty. :blob_neutral:
"Sh*t head is better than poopy head in my opinion." That made me smile. That's wit is it not??
I think that example is a bit overboard.
 

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"Sh*t head is better than poopy head in my opinion." That made me smile. That's wit is it not??
I think that example is a bit overboard.
If you said "your brain makes me remember diarrhea" instead of "you shithead" then I can see some wit maybe. And saying poopy head is also still swearing at someone, just much tamer.
 

NikkuNii

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If you said "your brain makes me remember diarrhea" instead of "you shithead" then I can see some wit maybe. And saying poopy head is also still swearing at someone, just much tamer.
Ah I see... humu humu
 
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