Remember you asked for this:Anyone want to yell at me until I write a new chapter? I need serious help.
Nope. I am lazy. I just finished reading. There are too many plot holes but who am I to talk?I guess it wasn't good enough.
What plot holes? Pretty sure there are none.Nope. I am lazy. I just finished reading. There are too many plot holes but who am I to talk?
You have more readers than me with less chapters. The grammar is god and the story captures. That is al matters.
You should continue pal.
That is what I am talking about ? If it works don't fix it. Your story works. Just continue writing.What plot holes? Pretty sure there are none.![]()