Phrasing issues / brain fart

Juia_Darkcrest

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"I'm not leaving you behind! I would rather face death at your side than have to live with the shame of not being able to repay my debt to you." She said, the conviction in her voice sounding like she wouldn’t break any argument.


I am brain farting so hard right now... the bold text, is that how that phrase goes or is it she wouldn't broke any argument? Broker? Or is it something else? Break just doesn't look right
 

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like she wouldn’t break any argument.
the conviction in her voice a steel that could bear the weight of the world.

the conviction in her voice sounds like she would reject any resistance.

the conviction in her voice sounds like a law, immutable, beyond the interferencs of both gods and demons.

the conviction in her voice, was a fact, beyond contestation, beyond dispute.
 

Juia_Darkcrest

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the conviction in her voice a steel that could bear the weight of the world.

the conviction in her voice sounds like she would reject any resistance.

the conviction in her voice sounds like a law, immutable, beyond the interferencs of both gods and demons.

the conviction in her voice, was a fact, beyond contestation, beyond dispute.
I'll go with brook, these other ones seem a little... ostentatious for the situation.
 
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