On a technical level... how is my smut?

[meza]

I'm a bit worried about my Smut getting repetitive and stuff. Only so many times I can describe a penis entering a p*ssy. Are there any ways to avoid this without things getting stilted? Current work in sig.

 

[Ai-chan]

Make a poem.

Shall I compare thee to a summer's day.
Though thine more dark and eventful.
Rough pounding do the mortar of may.
For the belly to be large and fruitful.

 

[HisDivineShadow]

Nice ?

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[Alski]

46

 

[RepresentingCaution]

Throw in some toys . . . or have them step on their toddler's toys with bare feet.

 

[meza]

46

Is that Yoroshiku?

 

[Alski]

Is that Yoroshiku?

No, its your technical rating.

 

[lambenttyto]

I'm a bit worried about my Smut getting repetitive and stuff. Only so many times I can describe a penis entering a p*ssy. Are there any ways to avoid this without things getting stilted? Current work in sig.

I've only written one spicy story before. But I didn't lead with the spicy scene, it's at the end of the story, and everything I wrote leads up and teases what's to come. It's about anticipation. Build that. It's foreplay, lol.