Not another Vampire novel - Beta Reader invite

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Hi,

"Alice Ate the Rabbit" is two-thirds complete and while I work on Act III, its time to get fresh eyes on it. I'm looking for a beta reader who isn't too sensitive. I don't have a filter so the story can get quite graphic ie.bloody, and sexy of course, because...vampires. The first two readers I found (on another platform) ran for the hills. Shrug. Its written in 3rd person omniscient, and the language is UK English. Around 40k words so far. Thanks for considering it.
P.S No animals are hurt in the story.

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CharlesEBrown said:
Sounds like a different kind of rabbit test...
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lol. interestingly, I'm dealing with the issue of pregnancy in Act III. Or at least the challenge of getting pregnant. Perhaps a beta reader might have some ideas about what to do there. (there's no male vampires left)
 
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davimai said:
lol. interestingly, I'm dealing with the issue of pregnancy in Act III. Or at least the challenge of getting pregnant. Perhaps a beta reader might have some ideas about what to do there. (there's no male vampires left)
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Reciprocal IVF? It still requires a sperm donor, but maybe it could work
 
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That's an option, yep. Although a bit clinical and hard to make very sexy? lol. I was thinking about the donation being given the old fashioned way. Our vampire's lesbian lover might not be all too thrilled with that idea though. If she can get over that, and insist on being present, then we might be cooking with gas. Then its a matter of choosing the donor...
 
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davimai said:
lol. interestingly, I'm dealing with the issue of pregnancy in Act III. Or at least the challenge of getting pregnant. Perhaps a beta reader might have some ideas about what to do there. (there's no male vampires left)
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Well you could always research Dhampyre/Dhampir - half-human, half-vampire.
 
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davimai said:
Hi,

"Alice Ate the Rabbit" is two-thirds complete and while I work on Act III, its time to get fresh eyes on it. I'm looking for a beta reader who isn't too sensitive. I don't have a filter so the story can get quite graphic ie.bloody, and sexy of course, because...vampires. The first two readers I found (on another platform) ran for the hills. Shrug. Its written in 3rd person omniscient, and the language is UK English. Around 40k words so far. Thanks for considering it.
P.S No animals are hurt in the story.

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It sounds fun and amazing, but sadly I do not beta read. It takes too much time.

So I'll just watch unless you're ok with a quick review.
 
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StoneInky said:
It sounds fun and amazing, but sadly I do not beta read. It takes too much time.

So I'll just watch unless you're ok with a quick review.
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no worries at all! Would love reviews also of course. but perhaps I should finish it first. And yeah, time is precious I agree.. when its done there'll be an audiobook version if you're still interested then. You can listen while driving or whatever :-) I have a really cool narrator in mind.
 
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davimai said:
no worries at all! Would love reviews also of course. but perhaps I should finish it first. And yeah, time is precious I agree.. when its done there'll be an audiobook version if you're still interested then. You can listen while driving or whatever :-) I have a really cool narrator in mind.
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Lmao, oh no, I don't drive. I'm too young.

That's another reason why I said I won't be able to beta read, I'm not experienced, lmao. But yeah, I'll read it.
 
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Perhaps I'm just crazy, but I don't see the book nor the user when I search the main site. Is there a link to this somewhere that I'm not seeing?

Thanks!
 
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SurfAngel_1031 said:
Perhaps I'm just crazy, but I don't see the book nor the user when I search the main site. Is there a link to this somewhere that I'm not seeing?

Thanks!
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hiya. I haven't posted the book cos I'm still working on it :-) I suppose I could post what I have so far, if thats a thing? I do appear as a user in the search tho. Not that my profile says much.
 
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