New title, New synopsis, New cover

[Kidd_Wadsworth]

I've been watching people criticise your choices and opinions, and seriously, your perseverance is off-charts.
Title is vague, but can pass. The cover has the hot babe everyone was asking you to put but she looks like she's about to off herself or is in the Daddy Issues WW league.
Synopsis... If she has no choice but to be eaten by a dragon, why don't you write the synopsis by spinning it around, because she will have to do it.

Like

''I'll do it. I'll be his feed. blah blah blah'' and then miracles happen

Good synopsis idea. I'll think about that one. Thanks. --Kidd

Your current cover is kinda cool, I like it. I also liked your previous ones, as it gave an epic-fantasy scale to it, but this one is nice as well.
Your synopsis, however, has many tense errors in it. It jumps from past to present to past to present many times. Just rewrite it in past tense, like fiction almost always is. I would even redo the entire synopsis, it reads kinda... bad. Make it more interesting and catchy.

So that's two "NO!' votes on the synopsis.

Just asking here. Did anyone read any part of the novel? Maybe the prologue? Thoughts?

--Kidd

 

[kophzi]

I heard there were anime tiddies here. Where them boobas at?