New Boys' Love Story: 'His Name Was the Chorus' (Feedback Welcome!)

[RiverDain]

Hi there!

I’m new here and still finding my way through this amazing jungle of creative work. If you have a moment, I’d love for you to check out my story His Name Was the Chorus—and I’d really appreciate any feedback you’re willing to share!

It’s a boys’ love story about Nico Sanchez, a rising musician, and Jordan Blake, a guarded author hiding behind charm and secrets. Their chemistry is electric, their love intoxicating—and dangerously volatile. As pride, fame, and buried truths collide, they’re forced to choose: keep up the illusion or risk everything for something real.

His Name Was the Chorus

Nico Sanchez is a rising musician, determined to make his mark in the unforgiving world of fame. With a fierce belief in his talent, he’s set on chasing his dreams. Jordan Blake is a bestselling author with a carefully managed public persona and a life scripted down to the...

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Thanks so much for reading, and I’m excited to hear your thoughts!

Take care,
River

 

[Empress_Omnii]

BL is by far the least popular form of romance on the site. I would like read and share my thoughts, but I just have so many other stories that I need to get through.

I just don't enjoy reading male characters nearly as much as I do lesbians... but there are a few people on the forums that do read bl..? I think? So hopefully they see this.

 

[CharlesEBrown]

BL is by far the least popular form of romance on the site. I would like read and share my thoughts, but I just have so many other stories that I need to get through.

I just don't enjoy reading male characters nearly as much as I do lesbians... but there are a few people on the forums that do read bl..? I think? So hopefully they see this.

There must be a few - but there is more a group of BL writers (there's a post about it up in Authors General)

 

[RiverDain]

BL is by far the least popular form of romance on the site. I would like read and share my thoughts, but I just have so many other stories that I need to get through.

I just don't enjoy reading male characters nearly as much as I do lesbians... but there are a few people on the forums that do read bl..? I think? So hopefully they see this.

Thank you for your feedback and honesty! I'm very new to posting and, unfortunately, I'm not quite sure which forum is the most appropriate.

There must be a few - but there is more a group of BL writers (there's a post about it up in Authors General)

Thank you! I'll make sure to check it out!

 

[tiaf]

How did this thread escape my radar?

You can come to the BLpalace discord to ask for more tips from fellow BL connoisseurs ~

publish some more and you’re eligible to get a free chibi drawn of your main couple and a feature in the next BLBL newsletter issue~

(I’m not some scam or a bot)

 

[RiverDain]

How did this thread escape my radar?

You can come to the BLpalace discord to ask for more tips from fellow BL connoisseurs ~

publish some more and you’re eligible to get a free chibi drawn of your main couple and a feature in the next BLBL newsletter issue~

(I’m not some scam or a bot)

Thank you! I'll make sure to check it out! ?