Neex feedback on a chapter

[Goku9819]

Hey guys so recently I started on this series. I was hoping to get some feedback on the prologue and the first chapter.

- V1. Prologue | Scribble Hub

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- V1.C1. His Name is Yogan | Scribble Hub

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[22_Ti]

I've left a comment on the prologue, at least. I love the description of the setting and how you show how the characters internalize what they are learning.