Nishimiya Sho lived in a commonplace residence with normalcy; he was a child with daring inquisitiveness, fondness for entertainment, and unusual excitement for hazardous adventures.
Sure. Again, the language is off, but at least it can be mostly understood. It introduces the character
By accident, Nishimiya Sho fell from a mountain out of the blue. What was supposed to amount to death, became a scene of the supernatural; his whole body was excellent, yet the ground he landed on wasn’t.
What the heck is this? It's avoiding going into detail, but also giving unnecessary details.
Something like, "After an unfortunate accident, he discovers his latent power." Even that's not really great though.
Discovering a unique ability in him, he enthusiastically runs to his residence, only to find out his family had been a victim of murder.
... Wow, what a coincidence. The Protagonist
gets superpowers,
gets a reason to use them, AND
loses the people who might try to teach him to use them responsibly.
It's not the worst. But it's also what made me click off when I read the synopsis the first time around. Too contrived.
Stuck in the past for a long time, he tries to discover the purpose of his power while searching for the killer.
I assume he's not literally stuck in the past. It's fine though.
