My Webnovel Journey – “Don’t Ask About My Past”

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TomoKrishna

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CHAPTER 75 - A FAMILIAR VOICE
TomoKrishna said:
Don’t Ask About My Past – Fantasy & Adventure Novel

Daily Updates | Chapter 65+ | Feedback Welcome

Hi everyone!
I've been writing and uploading this story for the past 3.5 months, and it's grown into 64 chapters so far.

Starting now, I’m promoting from Chapter 65 onward — and I’m so excited to share it with you all!

Chapter 65 : ROOM 3 PART 1

This story is full of:

Ninja powers
Family, bonds
Secrets, mysteries
Tournament arcs with humor, and tension

And I'll daily post the links and want to create a big thread, so you can scroll down and check my other chapters.
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Bro, I suggest, instead of revising your chapters, you should first revise your title, synopsis, and cover. Your title is too abstract, the cover too monotonous, and the synopsis too bland—what's the point in people reading this novel? You'd be better off giving it a compelling synopsis.
 
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Eldoria said:
Bro, I suggest, instead of revising your chapters, you should first revise your title, synopsis, and cover. Your title is too abstract, the cover too monotonous, and the synopsis too bland—what's the point in people reading this novel? You'd be better off giving it a compelling synopsis.
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I mean already some readers read they will get confuse right and the title is basically the main plot, yeah discription is bland or simple I will change, and cover is the main i getting a thought to change or not but I stopping at thoughts if I change, already reading people get confuse right, could you suggest a good tone i will recreate, and aa i revising again just copying link and replying but I trying to create a massive thread, if I post in my post it will get on top of forums for few minutes or hours until another one post, just my hope someone will read it, thanks for suggestion bro I will look it into this on this weekend holidays. On e again thanks.
 
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TomoKrishna said:
Ah ? that I used chat gpt, remaining all are I typed, but I didn't post the chapters in forums when I uploaded, so I think my story didn't getting the traction, I tried like this, and after this I will just post new chapter links without that long message in this thread, first message right about story? Is it not good? ?
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Of course you need help. You're using AI. It isn't going to improve your writing at all. No one needs to read it to know it's not going to be good if you're throwing it into chat gpt lol
 
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soupsabaw said:
Of course you need help. You're using AI. It isn't going to improve your writing at all. No one needs to read it to know it's not going to be good if you're throwing it into chat gpt lol
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No no I just use chat gpt for how can I say, which words I use like to know grammer, like for example frowned, scoffed etc... and i using for grammar mistakes like puncuation full stop, comma, or native lines, and that message you tagged is for post, that person asked your post message is different than other messages, I used chat gpt for the first message in this post and other replies are just I typed at that time itself like this reply, and I know chat gpt is worst at writing it doesn't have emotional writing it thinks it generated lines are emotional and the irritating part is, it tell the given part is good right? I take help from it i agree, thanks for valuable suggestion i will follow it
 
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"Hey, your story looks interesting! I'd love to swap reviews. Here is the link to my novel: Star Nexus: The Debtor | Scribble Hub
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