My new story

Nhatduongg

Yuyuko Saigyouji, The Dreaming Ghost
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Got no motivation left with my main novel so I put it in hiatus for a while, now I’m planning a new novel.
I finished the synopsis so I wanna check for any problems:

An was a girl who would hoard everything in her house, she also had a habit of using the bare minimum to do the job. Like when she was in high school, she used a single pen for a year and still passed. But all that is not important anymore because she is now standing in another world.
What is she going to do? Will she take anything like when she was on Earth?
“Wait… Don’t tell me you’re gonna clear that dungeon with a stone spear?!”

I will be grateful if you can leave a thought for this.

Edit: BTW the title is gonna be The girl who liked to collect everything.
 
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Yamazaru

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Shit, I wanna read that. It's an actually interesting isekai! Looking forward to it!
 

Cipiteca396

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An < Anne, or Ana or anything that doesn't make you think you skipped a noun that started with a vowel.

The first part could be read as she's lazy, rather than resourceful. You could go through the whole year with one pen if you just never wrote anything. But a lazy person wouldn't run into a dungeon with nothing, so that's probably not the case...
 

Nhatduongg

Yuyuko Saigyouji, The Dreaming Ghost
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An < Anne, or Ana or anything that doesn't make you think you skipped a noun that started with a vowel.

The first part could be read as she's lazy, rather than resourceful. You could go through the whole year with one pen if you just never wrote anything. But a lazy person wouldn't run into a dungeon with nothing, so that's probably not the case...
I’m taking a Vietnamese name, I’ll look for another name then.

Hmm… I can’t seem to be able to take a better example, any idea please?
 
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