My first novel!!

[YingYan]

Hello everyone! This is my first novel, and I’d like to invite you all to give it a read. I’m open to any feedback and criticism.

 

[Eldoria]

Please put the thread in the feedback section!

 

[Fairemont]

And include a link to the fiction page.

 

[NapLovingImmortal]

Why did my head read "anoter system" instead of "aether system"