Anonjohn20
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I hate your story because it doesn't have enough bulls and cows! lol jkI'm in the odd position of having time to post on forums but no time to write.
I want to preface this by saying a lot of the comments I get are really positive, helpful, and even the frustrating ones have pointed out honest mistakes. The top three most irrating comments for me.
3. I hate your book about magic and wizards because it has magic and wizards and that's too much for me. *oooookay?*
2. You released a bonus chapter out of sequence and I'm angry you broke my immersion. *Well, the chapter has the number where it actually goes and I wrote it to thank my readers. Please understand it'll be moved soon.*
1. Your story is meh because your central character is passive.
*Apparently there is a ban on passive characters. My autistic unemployed librarian whose social and financial life is a disaster should instantly become a genius hero goddess. She should know the solution to everything in the first chapter while being massively OP. She'd never possibly handle the destruction of her life and being thrown into a hellscape of a dungeon death game before the cruel and apathetic final bosses themselves with a state of shock and emotional confusion. People who are scared never attempt to summon up a moment of courage or control. Getting swept up into events beyond our control is a thing that NEVER HAPPENS and apperently has no universal connection. Well, you know what, after much agonizing debate I decided that to lean into my original decisions because not all central characters should have the same F-g reactions and personality. I know this is wrong, but sometimes, just F-k nuerotypicals.*