Magical girls breaking bad

[ACertainPassingUser]

Bruh just write it yourself at this point

Yeah, sorry, got carried away by the idea of writing sad flashback interlude chapter and ends up making a whole new prompt (or draft) of my own story.

That may be a bit too much for me.

How so ? Is the story simply too much sad ? Or just my idea is too big and off-branch to be included inside yours ? (Seriously curious)

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Spoiler: Long commentary

To be honest, I just want to put some of tragic idea of the genderbend magical girl after reading Magical Girl Kakeru. It kinda funny shit memes that creative enough to put pee training and pregnancy simulation.

I know the manga has "shotacon" them to it, but I liked the theme of junior-senior relationship of future junior and will-be retired magical girl team.

The whole option C is really just my curiosity of "what if : instead of just missing posters, the poor boy even got his existence erased from of reality", I also rack my brain really hard for that.

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I even recently discovered that losing the person in front of you isn't just the saddest part.

The saddest part is when you're trying to recall all the memories again, the sad torture will start all over again, and you will realize that you don't want to lose that person in frost place.

Most people tried to forget their pain, numb their pain and get over it.

But these magical girl had to remember and recall everything to make sure the memories of the lovely junior they recruit, taught lessons, and spent time together, had been forgotten by the world, and there's risk of them forgetting him altogether.

If they kept trying to remember the boy, they will always be in pain and sad. But if they forgot and move on, they might even forgot his existence altogether.

Making painting of the boy as memorial is one of the best realistic choice I can think of, if I'm in their position.

I almost teared up when imagining when the painting is complete and the magical girls take turns making funeral speech for the boy. (Ah, forgot to out that detail do I ?)(i will insert it now).

Kinda overdo it to be honest, and the results isn't even complete. It has too much detail that there's many times when i forgot to put details in one part, and then wonder why I write a certain part like this or that, erasing it because it looks silly, and remember the details and why I write it like that again. Rinse and repeat.

 

[Representing_Tromba]

How so ? Is the story simply too much sad ? Or just my idea is too big and off-branch to be included inside yours ? (Seriously curious)

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Spoiler: Long commentary

To be honest, I just want to put some of tragic idea of the genderbend magical girl after reading Magical Girl Kakeru. It kinda funny shit memes that creative enough to put pee training and pregnancy simulation.

I know the manga has "shotacon" them to it, but I liked the theme of junior-senior relationship of future junior and will-be retired magical girl team.

The whole option C is really just my curiosity of "what if : instead of just missing posters, the poor boy even got his existence erased from of reality", I also rack my brain really hard for that.

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I even recently discovered that losing the person in front of you isn't just the saddest part.

The saddest part is when you're trying to recall all the memories again, the sad torture will start all over again, and you will realize that you don't want to lose that person in frost place.

Most people tried to forget their pain, numb their pain and get over it.

But these magical girl had to remember and recall everything to make sure the memories of the lovely junior they recruit, taught lessons, and spent time together, had been forgotten by the world, and there's risk of them forgetting him altogether.

If they kept trying to remember the boy, they will always be in pain and sad. But if they forgot and move on, they might even forgot his existence altogether.

Making painting of the boy as memorial is one of the best realistic choice I can think of, if I'm in their position.

I almost teared up when imagining when the painting is complete and the magical girls take turns making funeral speech for the boy. (Ah, forgot to out that detail do I ?)(i will insert it now).

Kinda overdo it to be honest, and the results isn't even complete. It has too much detail that there's many times when i forgot to put details in one part, and then wonder why I write a certain part like this or that, erasing it because it looks silly, and remember the details and why I write it like that again. Rinse and repeat.

It's just not my style. If you wanted to write it, be my guest. Though if I was writing it then I would probably make it more light-hearted until one scene that tips everything in a dark direction with one minor bit of light or hope the characters at the end. How that would play out would be very dependant on the rest of the story. I'll set up chapter milestones with one scene that needs to happen for the plot but everything else is completely made up on the spot. My notes are like, "chapter 1, introduce characters and give stakes." "Chapter 2, worldbuild a bit and have the barfight scene." "Chapter 3, character dies and some characters start their revenge plot." It's not very detailed but it allows for a lot of wiggle room so if I wanted to add in a character and plotline like you offered then I could, but only if it matches with the flow of the story and plot so far.

 

[ACertainPassingUser]

It's just not my style. If you wanted to write it, be my guest. Though if I was writing it then I would probably make it more light-hearted until one scene that tips everything in a dark direction with one minor bit of light or hope the characters at the end. How that would play out would be very dependant on the rest of the story. I'll set up chapter milestones with one scene that needs to happen for the plot but everything else is completely made up on the spot. My notes are like, "chapter 1, introduce characters and give stakes." "Chapter 2, worldbuild a bit and have the barfight scene." "Chapter 3, character dies and some characters start their revenge plot." It's not very detailed but it allows for a lot of wiggle room so if I wanted to add in a character and plotline like you offered then I could, but only if it matches with the flow of the story and plot so far.

I see, lighthearted content.

I never realized that I almost never write any light hearted content because I'm subconsciously ignoring any kind of event without heavy dark tones myself.

I sometimes don't realize why my content is just feel dark and tragic, i thought I supposed to have Past my Chunni phase.

And wiggle room, I forget that. those yet-to-be-explained were definitely necessary to prevent accidental plot holes.

My idea is actually simple : just a genderbend magic girl that the girl accidentally recruited, taught and train against monster, but then he died due to lack of training and bad supervision, and became a permanent scar in the team.

The whole 3 scenario is me overdoing a shitty joke.

But yeah, if such traumatic loss happened, the magic girl group would lose their cohesiveness and sense of camaraderie, so they would split and disband far before your main story of girls desperate enough to stole cocaine begins. So it need to be out into another story, which I don't have the willpower to made one.

 

[Ellieporter]

"Being a magical girl is hardwork, you know... Since, the pay isnt that much. I'll teach you how to make extra money."

*Hands over 1kg of meth*

"Think of this bag like its a pen. How would you sell it to me?"