AlexRiven201
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I felt that so hard. Also I may have missed when OP said they wanted smut explicitly lmfaoI actually relate to this frustration so much that it’s the reason I started writing my own series.
You’re spot on about the 'mechanical' feel—if the spice isn't an extension of the emotional arc, it just feels like filler. I spent a lot of time trying to solve that exact problem in my book "Bound". My goal was to make sure the intimacy actually feels earned and that the relationship shifts because of those moments, rather than just hitting a word count.
If you're looking for that grounded, 'connection-first' vibe you found in Their Wonder Years, you might find my stuff hits the same itch. I'd love to know if it lives up to your 'non-mechanical' standard.
I tried my hand at that too! If you or OP wanted to give me feedback on how I did within it or in DMs if you wanted (idk I'm still learning how to use the internet actively instead of passively). Anyway, the point is your opinion is valuable to me lmfao
All the best!