Looking for honest feedback - Path of the King

[NoxelStudios]

Hey everyone,

I just started posting my novel, Path of the King. I'd love to get some honest feedback on the beginning before I get too deep into the story.

Link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2276139/path-of-the-king/

Thanks in advance for giving it a chance!

Cheers!

 

[IWILLDEFYTHEHEAVENS]

I only read the first chapter and it's pretty good.

I prefer transmigration novels, so I can't give a better review.