melcomely
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Hello! I'm seeking feedback on my first work, "Undo Her".
You're free to skip the brief Preface of the story, but I've been posting it over the last couple of weeks and wanted to know if the Prologue had any sauce whatsoever.
Read "PROLOGUE": https://www.scribblehub.com/read/2235188-undo-her/chapter/2235192/
The novel itself is about the consequences of teleportation in the psyche of the main character, and the Prologue introduces some of the principal characters, good and bad. I hope you enjoy it! :)
You're free to skip the brief Preface of the story, but I've been posting it over the last couple of weeks and wanted to know if the Prologue had any sauce whatsoever.
Read "PROLOGUE": https://www.scribblehub.com/read/2235188-undo-her/chapter/2235192/
The novel itself is about the consequences of teleportation in the psyche of the main character, and the Prologue introduces some of the principal characters, good and bad. I hope you enjoy it! :)