Looking for feedback on my new web novel

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Nope, it's all me, with the exception of what amounts to a high tech spell check. And it still says there's a 50/50 chance it was written by an AI. So maybe people should be a little less eager to throw around that accusation. And for the record, here's what it's saying has a 50% chance of being AI generated:

Definitely sounds human.

Maybe other AI detectors are a little too sensitive? I mean, the very first part sounds very... descriptive. Almost comically descpritive. It reminds me a little of AI. AI tries to do this all the time because the more descriptive the result, the better it kindles the imagination. This works for classical literature, but is entirely misplaced for webnovels or modern stories that are popular on SH. You also use words that I, as an ESL minion, find a little hard to understand. Maybe that also points towards AI? ",the sounds of Sequestrinous waking up..." makes me sweat a little.

Maybe just take the 50% AI as a compliment instead? ;) It probably just means that your technical writing skills are quite advanced.

Quillbot also confirms it:

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I checked the prologue with 3 different AI text detectors: zerogpt, grammarly, and quillbot. The results were different. 33%, 4%, and 0% similar to AI text.

Critical note:
I copied the prologue text until it filled the AI text generator dashboard and the amount of text that can be checked in one session can vary, such as zerogpt, which allows up to 15,000 characters to be checked.

This means that if the chapter text cannot be checked completely, the checking session must be done twice. And this is unfortunate. The AI text detector can give wrong results if, when we copy the checked text, it 'happens' to be similar to the AI text generated, so that the results can be up to 80-100% similar to AI text.

I personally do not trust AI text detectors completely, even the AI text detector claims the results are indeed inaccurate, there can be true negatives (text detected by AI when it is actually hand-typed, but the style is similar to AI text) or conversely false positives (text detected as not AI when it is actually AI-generated text).

Therefore, instead of using an AI text detector to detect whether text is true or not.

It might be more accurate to analyze the story's moral, coherence, and correspondence.

First, the moral of the story is what moral message the author wants to convey to the reader. Generally, AI struggles to bring stories to life and have a moral. Because to create a living story, the author usually explores his or her life experiences, trauma, values, love, and hopes. This involves a creative process. No matter how good an AI model is (currently), it lacks the creativity to create something from imagination and inner experience. What AI produces is more like patterned or random text depending on the instructions given, and it is generated from billions of datasets.

Second, we can examine the coherence between sentences, paragraphs, scenes, and chapters. Do these texts have narrative integrity in forming a discourse that illustrates the story's moral premise? AI-generated text can't struggle to form connections between sentences, paragraphs, scenes, and chapters. Why? Because AI-generated text is usually random and instructed per session, unless there is a super LLM model capable of generating a complete novel containing 50,000 words in a single session, discourse coherence is possible. But free AI doesn't offer this option.

Finally, we can examine correspondence. Novels created by human thought usually have correspondence with the real world, whether the symbols used are allegories of real-world realities. Certain scenes can reflect the author's experiences. Even the novel itself can be an allegory of the dark realities of the real world.

Ultimately, a true author will be able to answer these three questions: what is the moral of the novel? How coherent is it? And how does the novel correspond to the real world? If they wrote with their own thoughts, I'm sure they would be able to answer these questions. Conversely, if it was purely AI-generated text, they wouldn't be able to answer these questions.

It's like someone copying from a reference book (cheating) and someone answering with their own thoughts. Someone who didn't copy (even if the answer is absurd) will be able to explain their answer. Meanwhile, someone who cheats (even if the answer is correct) will find it difficult to explain their answer. Even if they are forced to answer, they will say, "because the reference book says so."
 
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Nope, it's all me, with the exception of what amounts to a high tech spell check. And it still says there's a 50/50 chance it was written by an AI. So maybe people should be a little less eager to throw around that accusation. And for the record, here's what it's saying has a 50% chance of being AI generated:
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As I said, I only trust this checker more enough to see it work consistently. I don't know why people around here are using other checkers besides this. It's "free" if you know how to use trial versions using different browsers lol
 

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Maybe other AI detectors are a little too sensitive?
Google "Zerogpt isn't accurate" and you'll find several accounts of college students complaining that their professors are giving them F's just because Zerogpt and other AI detectors said the assignments they turned in were AI generated. I'm not defending people who actually post stories that were written by AI. I'm just saying, stop using these websites when they clearly don't work.
 

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Google "Zerogpt isn't accurate" and you'll find several accounts of college students complaining that their professors are giving them F's just because Zerogpt and other AI detectors said the assignments they turned in were AI generated. I'm not defending people who actually post stories that were written by AI. I'm just saying, stop using these websites when they clearly don't work.

I think you can neither argue: "They clearly don't work" as well as "they are 100% accurate". I think people should use them as a clue, that's all.
 

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I think you can neither argue: "They clearly don't work" as well as "they are 100% accurate". I think people should use them as a clue, that's all.
I mean, what more proof do you need than it being so incompetent it gave my writing a 50/50 chance of being AI generated?
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Google "Zerogpt isn't accurate" and you'll find several accounts of college students complaining that their professors are giving them F's just because Zerogpt and other AI detectors said the assignments they turned in were AI generated. I'm not defending people who actually post stories that were written by AI. I'm just saying, stop using these websites when they clearly don't work.
I offer a more humane option by offering a method for examining the story's moral, coherence, and correspondence, rather than leaving the verdict to an AI text detector.
 

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I mean, what more proof do you need than it being so incompetent it gave my writing a 50/50 chance of being AI generated?
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I'd say your writing has certain characteristics that are typically present in AI writing. I pointed out a few earlier. Also, it says 50% AI, so it's not conclusive. Nobody will claim your writing is AI because of that. If that number were 100% the situation would be different.
 
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Interesting, when a person deleted their account their fiction remain on the site.

You cant even click on their author profile on the main site, but their book remains.

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At this moment at least.
 

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Ended up going down a rabbit hole because of this post, running all my chapters through different AI detectors lmfao. Worst verdict I got was lightly edited by AI on GPTZero. That made me curious because I really do write everything myself. AI has helped me with editing and sentence structure here and there, but the story, characters, and emotions—that’s all mine. The biggest thing I ever had GPT do was take an old fanfic draft and swap in my current character names and setting so I didn’t have to manually comb through myself. I also use Grammarly/ProWritingAid and sometimes have GPT catch inconsistency errors like double spaces and whatever else. But I don’t outsource the actual storytelling.

I think detectors might flag me because of how my writing style has evolved. When I started, I wrote really long, painfully slow chapters—like 7–8k words each, some were 9-11k. My first big fic hit 120k words on FF.net and barely moved as far as plot. Over time, and through a lot of rewrites, I taught myself to cut the fat. Now I aim for a more cinematic approach: short, snappy camera-like cuts layered with longer novel-style passages when it matters. Detectors judge text on patterns, so if something looks too clean or too predictable, they sometimes call it AI. Funny enough, I noticed the "messier" a story is, the more likely it gets marked as human.

I grew up on anime, manga, and fanfiction, and only later started reading traditional novels. My style now is kind of a hybrid—quick, anime-inspired beats mixed with more grounded scene building from books. So yeah I think detectors might sometimes say it looks AI, but some of the flagged lines were 100% mine. I’ve been writing for years and I’ve worked hard to tighten my voice from that early, bloated fanfic into something more cinematic and deliberate. I still want to bang my head against the wall while writing sometimes. But if there’s one thing I can’t deny, it’s that AI tools have been huge for organizing my thoughts and story bible. That has made it 3x easier to actually start writing again.
 
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