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Roseofblades

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So, I recently read a story on a site that was exclusively for sex stories. It really inflamed one of my lesser visited kinks, which made me wonder just how popular it would be outside the bounds of that site. If you've read my primary story How I became the Empress of Hell you'll know I don't have any issues with teasing with the idea of non-consensual encounters. While I try to avoid outright rape scenes and instead try to use what I call "coerced consent", there are times, with the correct context and the correct phrasing and like... dozens of other things, that it can be presented in a way that isn't completely off-putting for the reader. At least not to the point of not wanting to read it.

The primary reason I bring this up is because it made me think of an interesting story idea. Basically, girl get's truck-kun'ed and ends up as some sort of... Breeder? She figures out she has a special skill that lets her control what traits or abilities her offspring have, and eventually builds her own army of super soldiers. Or something to that effect. As this would involve an absolute shit-ton of non-con stuff, I just have zero idea if this is something anyone would even want to read on here. I'd love to hear any input on this, even if it's just to tell me what a shit idea this would be.

SECONDLY: Despite being an avid anime fan and having a pretty vast knowledge of most writing topics... I still do not understand what "Cultivation" is. If someone would be willing to explain it to me I would greatly appreciate it!
Edit: thank you to those who helped!
 
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1- i think i read a breeder mother kinda story, probbly about a year plus ago. Was ehhh but not sure if that was storytype not connecting to me or author not doing the idea just right. If you try, temmember to make it more about "both sides want it for their own reason" and less "one rapes the other and the other tolorates it for the power-up".

2-common explanation is a power up system based of the universe being calld "heaven" and it desiding how some things happen for some grand goal, cultivators endlessly train and improve themselfs, even at the cost of -everything- and get proud about being in stage so and so at a age several time what some young genius would be when he reaches same stage, some stupid pride always involved, might makes right stuff... oh and making/improving qi core or soul or whatever...

Basicly insted of cultivating plants at a farm they cultivate both themself and ther ego in a shut in sect.
 

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Meng Hao walked into the McDonald's. The cultivator taking his order gave a derisive snort, but Meng Hao did not really care, because he had repressed his aura down to the Single Patty Realm, and a fool would not be able to tell his true level of burger eating.

"Give me... a Happy Meal!"

The cultivator's face flickered before he finally regained his composure and laughed. "You couldn't afford a Happy Meal. Get lost! Don't you see that there are Double Quarter Pounder Realm eaters waiting behind you?"

Meng Hao slapped his bag of holding and threw 80 billion spirit McDonald's coupons onto the counter, causing an earthquake which demolished half of the restaurant. Everyone dropped their jaws. None could see how this was possible!

"I'll take that Happy Meal with a side order of fries, " Meng Hao said. He was as calm as the ocean in a painting of an insanely calm ocean. "And let me see your manager!"

The cashier cultivator coughed up a mouthful of ketchup. He simply could not handle Meng Hao's killing intent, because he was only at the Quarter Pounder with Cheese realm himself. Even though Meng Hao had suppressed his aura, because he had cultivated the Heavenly Burgin' Qi, this was enough to kill people a few levels higher if he truly wanted.

It was then that another man which a much more fierce aura stepped forward. "You dare make trouble here?"

"P... Patriarch Hamburglar!"

Patriarch Hamburglar was 99 cents of the way into the Big Mac Realm, plus tax! Meng Hao was pushed back two feet, knocking over a soda machine. Powerade Mountain Berry Blast geysered outward, killing several onlookers.

Of course, Mayor McCheese saw all this happen through the window.

Meng Hao coughed up a mouthful of blood, snorted, constricted his pupils, and then his expression went calm. He unleashed the aura of 64 patties, condensed down to a 2 patty stack that could fit into his mouth!

Mayor McCheese coughed up a mouthful of cheese. His pupils constricted.

"Is this... Seeking the McRib stage??"

Meng Hao had the gentle air of a scholar, but it wouldn't stop him from killing several people in a McDonald's.

"Burger Devouring Scripture! I'm Lovin' It!"

With the first keyword of the Burger Devouring Scripture, everyone below the early Quarter Pounder With Cheese stage exploded into purple mist. The light of the immense heavenly burger shone down with the contours of a golden arch as 9 illusory burgers floated around Meng Hao's body, which is probably an important xianxia number that matches the number of lakes in some sacred Chinese province I've never heard of. But that was only a fraction of Meng Hao's power. He waved his arm, bringing forth thirty more cultivation techniques that hadn't appeared in over 400 chapters!

"Heavenly Tribulation Fries! Eastern Everburning Egg McMuffin! Fruit Smoothie Guillotine! Soul McCafe Mocha Incarnation!"

Meng Hao's expression was the same as ever as he slapped his bag of holding, and brought out his karmic ketchup packet, Fry Cook Lord medallion, seventeen different wooden time spatulas, a five-coloured resurrection coupon, the silk burger wrapper, various souls of lightning McNuggets that he may or may not still have, and his mask of the legacy of Ronald McDonald. Oh, and the image of a flying Chicken Snack Wrap dragon appeared. Remember that? It was basically his Main Thing at the start of the novel, but quietly faded into irrelevance. Until now!

All of this takes some time to describe, but actually happened in the space of only a few breaths.

"What! Impossible!"

Meng Hao wanted to summon the parrot as well, but it was too overcome with eroticism by the purple fur depicted on a nearby poster of Grimace, and was busy drilling out a glory hole straight through the poster, and the wall it was pinned to, with its strong parrot erection.

But it was more than enough. The Hamburglar's soul flew out and was absorbed into his mask! He screamed as his body was destroyed completely.

Meng Hao brushed off his robe and swept up his spirit coupons and everyone's bags of holding which probably didn't have any cool sh*t inside unless I write him into a corner later, and anyways, don't worry about it for now. He surveyed the rubble that was all that remained of the McDonald's.

"Guess I'll be taking that Happy Meal... to go!"
 

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Cultivation is cultivating and cultivating is cultivation. It’s pretty simple!
 

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The primary reason I bring this up is because it made me think of an interesting story idea. Basically, girl get's truck-kun'ed and ends up as some sort of... Breeder? She figures out she has a special skill that lets her control what traits or abilities her offspring have, and eventually builds her own army of super soldiers. Or something to that effect. As this would involve an absolute shit-ton of non-con stuff, I just have zero idea if this is something anyone would even want to read on here. I'd love to hear any input on this, even if it's just to tell me what a shit idea this would be.
Try make her some monster, it would probably help the story? Some hive queen or anything that would make a lot of children? You could use more unconventional monsters like a slime, but the slime is more a ditto that can give birth to anything and get fucked of course by anything, she could then choose what DNA the child gets?
 

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So, I recently read a story on a site that was exclusively for sex stories. It really inflamed one of my lesser visited kinks, which made me wonder just how popular it would be outside the bounds of that site. If you've read my primary story How I became the Empress of Hell you'll know I don't have any issues with teasing with the idea of non-consensual encounters. While I try to avoid outright rape scenes and instead try to use what I call "coerced consent", there are times, with the correct context and the correct phrasing and like... dozens of other things, that it can be presented in a way that isn't completely off-putting for the reader. At least not to the point of not wanting to read it.

The primary reason I bring this up is because it made me think of an interesting story idea. Basically, girl get's truck-kun'ed and ends up as some sort of... Breeder? She figures out she has a special skill that lets her control what traits or abilities her offspring have, and eventually builds her own army of super soldiers. Or something to that effect. As this would involve an absolute shit-ton of non-con stuff, I just have zero idea if this is something anyone would even want to read on here. I'd love to hear any input on this, even if it's just to tell me what a shit idea this would be.

SECONDLY: Despite being an avid anime fan and having a pretty vast knowledge of most writing topics... I still do not understand what "Cultivation" is. If someone would be willing to explain it to me I would greatly appreciate it!
Non-consent is really bad in real life, but in fiction is really good.
It generates conflict and drama, which is what makes stories work. I think, especially in smut, it adds some spice. It's a bit like those toxic relationships we wouldn't want in real life, but in fiction or even in music, they attract us and make storytelling much more interesting.
 

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Try make her some monster, it would probably help the story? Some hive queen or anything that would make a lot of children? You could use more unconventional monsters like a slime, but the slime is more a ditto that can give birth to anything and get fucked of course by anything, she could then choose what DNA the child gets?
Definitely was going to be a monster of some sort. I was originally thinking some sort of goblinoid... but I'm not against the slime idea either. Although... that's leaning a bit too far into the dozen or so slime isekais.
Try make her some monster, it would probably help the story? Some hive queen or anything that would make a lot of children? You could use more unconventional monsters like a slime, but the slime is more a ditto that can give birth to anything and get fucked of course by anything, she could then choose what DNA the child gets?
Maybe something similar to the chimeras from Hunter x Hunter?


2-common explanation is a power up system based of the universe being calld "heaven" and it desiding how some things happen for some grand goal, cultivators endlessly train and improve themselfs, even at the cost of -everything- and get proud about being in stage so and so at a age several time what some young genius would be when he reaches same stage, some stupid pride always involved, might makes right stuff... oh and making/improving qi core or soul or whatever...

Basicly insted of cultivating plants at a farm they cultivate both themself and ther ego in a shut in sect.
Thank you. I knew I was likely overthinking it. This makes a lot more sense.
Non-consent is really bad in real life, but in fiction is really good.
It generates conflict and drama, which is what makes stories work. I think, especially in smut, it adds some spice. It's a bit like those toxic relationships we wouldn't want in real life, but in fiction or even in music, they attract us and make storytelling much more interesting.
I completely agree. The story I was originally reading that sparked this whole thing was about a girl becoming an alien sex slave. My wife doesn't understand most of my kinks... but I'm glad that others do ?
"Guess I'll be taking that Happy Meal... to go!"
Now that I understand what cultivation is... Is it bad I'd almost read this just because of how ridiculously terrible and hilarious it is?
 
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Here’s a site to help you get some keywords out of the way:


So, I recently read a story on a site that was exclusively for sex stories. It really inflamed one of my lesser visited kinks, which made me wonder just how popular it would be outside the bounds of that site. If you've read my primary story How I became the Empress of Hell you'll know I don't have any issues with teasing with the idea of non-consensual encounters. While I try to avoid outright rape scenes and instead try to use what I call "coerced consent", there are times, with the correct context and the correct phrasing and like... dozens of other things, that it can be presented in a way that isn't completely off-putting for the reader. At least not to the point of not wanting to read it.

The primary reason I bring this up is because it made me think of an interesting story idea. Basically, girl get's truck-kun'ed and ends up as some sort of... Breeder? She figures out she has a special skill that lets her control what traits or abilities her offspring have, and eventually builds her own army of super soldiers. Or something to that effect. As this would involve an absolute shit-ton of non-con stuff, I just have zero idea if this is something anyone would even want to read on here. I'd love to hear any input on this, even if it's just to tell me what a shit idea this would be.

SECONDLY: Despite being an avid anime fan and having a pretty vast knowledge of most writing topics... I still do not understand what "Cultivation" is. If someone would be willing to explain it to me I would greatly appreciate it!
I will give the simple explanation of ‘Cultivation’.

Think of a dystopia where those with greater strength are respected and given human rights in Ancient China. There, only those talented in magic can learn and become stronger in it.

They ‘cultivate’ this strength through any method the author decides. Learning more about it and overcoming obstacles to get stronger. Meeting others who are already at the top of magical prowess. Having to survive in a chaotic world where resources to increase this magic are monopolised. Nothing is given for free.

Most base ‘cultivation’ on Qi and martial arts in their novels. Going from ‘I can beat a tiger’ stage to ‘I can beat a dragon’ stage. Eventually becoming immortals (which in this case does not mean eternal, but a title given to those with the highest magic powers in Eastern Fantasy).

The power system of a cultivation novel vaguely talks about energy and random events that strengthen or weaken it. As long as you can make it sound like it makes sense, ‘energy’ in a cultivation novel can do literally anything.

It’s a test of how convincing you can make the nonsense about Yinyang or whatever.
 
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Definitely was going to be a monster of some sort. I was originally thinking some sort of goblinoid... but I'm not against the slime idea either. Although... that's leaning a bit too far into the dozen or so slime isekais.
It would add something new from my knowledge, at least I know no hive mind slime story. It would interesting.
Maybe something similar to the chimeras from Hunter x Hunter?
I would love that.
 

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I completely agree. The story I was originally reading that sparked this whole thing was about a girl becoming an alien sex slave. My wife doesn't understand most of my kinks... but I'm glad that others do ?
We're not alone... the world is full of degenerates. :ROFLMAO:
Maybe something similar to the chimeras from Hunter x Hunter?

I love the chimera arc. I would really enjoy a story from the perspective of an ant, insect, alien, or a queen bee with a hive mind. I think it's quite original. I would avoid slimes and tentacles because they are quite overused, but don't let me influence you if you think they are ideal for the story, use them.
 

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I would like to point out something real quick. While everyone's explanation of cultivation is correct, there is a second definition that only applies to sexual stuff, which may or may not be what you are asking about.

Sexual cultivation is really just the act of stimulating someone's erogenous zones in order to make them more aware of those erogenous zones, which in turn makes them more sensitive. Supposedly. This pops up a lot in Hentai doujins and games. It technically works irl, because the situation and stimulation can cause some one to associate a certain type of stimulation such as nipple play to orgasm (Pavlovian conditioning). But I did read a news article about a man in Ohio who did so much prostate play that he accidentally cultivated his prostate too much. The poor guy became hyper-aware of his prostate, causing him to have involuntary orgasms while walking.
 

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I would like to point out something real quick. While everyone's explanation of cultivation is correct, there is a second definition that only applies to sexual stuff, which may or may not be what you are asking about.

Sexual cultivation is really just the act of stimulating someone's erogenous zones in order to make them more aware of those erogenous zones, which in turn makes them more sensitive. Supposedly. This pops up a lot in Hentai doujins and games. It technically works irl, because the situation and stimulation can cause some one to associate a certain type of stimulation such as nipple play to orgasm (Pavlovian conditioning). But I did read a news article about a man in Ohio who did so much prostate play that he accidentally cultivated his prostate too much. The poor guy became hyper-aware of his prostate, causing him to have involuntary orgasms while walking.
Based.
 

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The primary reason I bring this up is because it made me think of an interesting story idea. Basically, girl get's truck-kun'ed and ends up as some sort of... Breeder? She figures out she has a special skill that lets her control what traits or abilities her offspring have, and eventually builds her own army of super soldiers. Or something to that effect. As this would involve an absolute shit-ton of non-con stuff, I just have zero idea if this is something anyone would even want to read on here. I'd love to hear any input on this, even if it's just to tell me what a shit idea this would be.
This would be like a 50% interesting idea for me. I would probably add another twist.
Something like... Er... She can fine-tune the abilities even further by breeding with her offspring, maybe? If you want to go all-out kinky.
 
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