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One of the weirdest things about web novels that I've noticed is how there seem to be A LOT of authors that really want to have their main characters commit genocide. Most of the time it feels like the author just started by wanting the main character to be a mass murderer and then wrote a story around it.

Now, at first, you might think that if that's what you are after, the obvious choice would be to make the MC a villain. The problem with that is that as far as I've seen, villain MCs are just not a thing in web novels. Sure, there are plenty of evil MCs (including many that are not labeled as such), but never an MC that the readers are actually supposed to root against. Instead, their evil is always glorified and treated as part of what makes them 'cool'. These evil MCs are always used for nothing more than shallow power fantasies (The fact that the power fantasies of so many people seem to involve killing thousands of children is concerning, to say the least).

Explaining the motivation for a likable character to commit genocide is obviously impossible, so instead authors use some extremely bad excuses that can be roughly sorted into 3 categories.



Excuse 1 - I committed genocide in self-defense:

Killing someone to stop them from killing you or someone else is usually considered to be morally acceptable. So if the only way to save your family/friends/people is to kill the group that's threatening them, that should also be fine, right? The fans of stories that do this will usually be like "If I had to kill thousands to save my loved ones I would do it! If you think that's wrong is because you have been brainwashed by modern Western values!".

The problem is that the very idea of killing thousands of civilians being the only way to protect your loved ones is completely bonkers.

In the cases when the protagonist is overpowered and the bad guys pose no real threat, I'd argue that even killing an enemy army is morally dubious when they can just be threatened instead. But even if the bad guys are a real threat, it's insane to think that killing civilians is necessary.

So these authors always need to turn their characterization and world-building into complete nonsense.

The most common method is to make every single member of the group of people to be genocided cartoonishly racist or hateful against the group the MC is a part of, to the point of being suicidal. Every farmer, child, and old lady would rather die than stop trying to kill the MC's people and will be extremely cruel to any that they can get their hands on (I was going to include an extra category of excuses called 'they deserved the genocide', but that tends to be just an addition to the other three).

An alternative is to make the method of genocide ludicrously contrived so that the MC 'has no other choice'. Like giving them a superweapon that will inevitably kill the enemy civilians along with their army (but not the civilians on our side somehow) and cannot be used to threaten them for some reason.



Excuse 2 - I don't follow 'human morality' :

Let's just make the MC a dragon/monster/undead, that way you cannot judge their actions the way you would judge a human's, right?

The problem here is simple, the MCs of the novels that do this always think and act EXACTLY like a human, except for all the murder. If you ever see a novel be praised for having a character that acts like a REAL dragon/monster/undead, what that means is that the character is a human that will occasionally turn into an amoral murder hobo.

Naturally, if they didn't, the readers would not be able to self-insert as them to have their genocidal power fantasies.

When the author feels like they really want to insult the reader's intelligence, they will try to make a point that goes something like "There are so many stories with an MC that massacres monsters without a second thought, now the tables have turned!". As if killing mindless creatures that cannot be reasoned with was the same as a sapient being killing other sapient beings.

A lot of these """non-human""" MCs are reincarnated humans, and instead of making them struggle with their human memories, most authors will just claim that the transformation into a dragon/monster/undead took away their emotions and empathy, because the best way to make a character interesting is for them to not have emotions I guess.

These characters without emotion or empathy will then proceed to be very emotional and have a lot of empathy toward a group of other """non-human""" characters close to them. They'll just not have empathy towards humans or humanoids, because that's how empathy works, that's why there's no such thing as non-human self-insert characters and why cartoons with talking animals don't exist.

But only having empathy for your group of people while not thinking twice about killing those outside of it is something that certain humans have also done. And that's the thing, these characters that 'don't have human morality' are not non-human, they are just evil humans, but the narrative will pretend that they are not.


EXCUSE 3 - This story is light-hearted so my genocide doesn't count:

I will never understand why, but I've seen quite a few novels that are supposed to be 'light-hearted slice of life' include a character that's some powerful being that committed genocide on humans at some point in the past (sometimes even the present), usually worded as "destroyed a kingdom" or "destroyed x cities". Then the story will treat it as a joke and everyone will act as if that never happened.

It just drives me crazy every time the main characters run into any villains after that. They'll be like "That evil noble stole money from the orphans! So evil!" And I'll be like "How many orphans did your friend over there murder?!" Or they'll be like "Those humans are so racist" And I'll be like "More racist that the genocidal monster?!"

I don't know, maybe it's just me but this one is actually the one that bothers me the most. With the other two, I can at least understand by some edgy teenagers might think that they are 'deep'. But these attempts to sleight off hand a genocide past me just feel like a personal insult. And it just feels so pointless and like such a bad match for the genre.



Anyway, one last thing I want to say. Can you all stop pretending that genocidal MCs are something original? Because they really are a dime a dozen, but all of these novels will have people talking about how different from all other stories they are.
 

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One of the weirdest things about web novels that I've noticed is how there seem to be A LOT of authors that really want to have their main characters commit genocide. Most of the time it feels like the author just started by wanting the main character to be a mass murderer and then wrote a story around it.

Now, at first, you might think that if that's what you are after, the obvious choice would be to make the MC a villain. The problem with that is that as far as I've seen, villain MCs are just not a thing in web novels. Sure, there are plenty of evil MCs (including many that are not labeled as such), but never an MC that the readers are actually supposed to root against. Instead, their evil is always glorified and treated as part of what makes them 'cool'. These evil MCs are always used for nothing more than shallow power fantasies (The fact that the power fantasies of so many people seem to involve killing thousands of children is concerning, to say the least).

Explaining the motivation for a likable character to commit genocide is obviously impossible, so instead authors use some extremely bad excuses that can be roughly sorted into 3 categories.



Excuse 1 - I committed genocide in self-defense:

Killing someone to stop them from killing you or someone else is usually considered to be morally acceptable. So if the only way to save your family/friends/people is to kill the group that's threatening them, that should also be fine, right? The fans of stories that do this will usually be like "If I had to kill thousands to save my loved ones I would do it! If you think that's wrong is because you have been brainwashed by modern Western values!".

The problem is that the very idea of killing thousands of civilians being the only way to protect your loved ones is completely bonkers.

In the cases when the protagonist is overpowered and the bad guys pose no real threat, I'd argue that even killing an enemy army is morally dubious when they can just be threatened instead. But even if the bad guys are a real threat, it's insane to think that killing civilians is necessary.

So these authors always need to turn their characterization and world-building into complete nonsense.

The most common method is to make every single member of the group of people to be genocided cartoonishly racist or hateful against the group the MC is a part of, to the point of being suicidal. Every farmer, child, and old lady would rather die than stop trying to kill the MC's people and will be extremely cruel to any that they can get their hands on (I was going to include an extra category of excuses called 'they deserved the genocide', but that tends to be just an addition to the other three).

An alternative is to make the method of genocide ludicrously contrived so that the MC 'has no other choice'. Like giving them a superweapon that will inevitably kill the enemy civilians along with their army (but not the civilians on our side somehow) and cannot be used to threaten them for some reason.



Excuse 2 - I don't follow 'human morality' :

Let's just make the MC a dragon/monster/undead, that way you cannot judge their actions the way you would judge a human's, right?

The problem here is simple, the MCs of the novels that do this always think and act EXACTLY like a human, except for all the murder. If you ever see a novel be praised for having a character that acts like a REAL dragon/monster/undead, what that means is that the character is a human that will occasionally turn into an amoral murder hobo.

Naturally, if they didn't, the readers would not be able to self-insert as them to have their genocidal power fantasies.

When the author feels like they really want to insult the reader's intelligence, they will try to make a point that goes something like "There are so many stories with an MC that massacres monsters without a second thought, now the tables have turned!". As if killing mindless creatures that cannot be reasoned with was the same as a sapient being killing other sapient beings.

A lot of these """non-human""" MCs are reincarnated humans, and instead of making them struggle with their human memories, most authors will just claim that the transformation into a dragon/monster/undead took away their emotions and empathy, because the best way to make a character interesting is for them to not have emotions I guess.

These characters without emotion or empathy will then proceed to be very emotional and have a lot of empathy toward a group of other """non-human""" characters close to them. They'll just not have empathy towards humans or humanoids, because that's how empathy works, that's why there's no such thing as non-human self-insert characters and why cartoons with talking animals don't exist.

But only having empathy for your group of people while not thinking twice about killing those outside of it is something that certain humans have also done. And that's the thing, these characters that 'don't have human morality' are not non-human, they are just evil humans, but the narrative will pretend that they are not.


EXCUSE 3 - This story is light-hearted so my genocide doesn't count:

I will never understand why, but I've seen quite a few novels that are supposed to be 'light-hearted slice of life' include a character that's some powerful being that committed genocide on humans at some point in the past (sometimes even the present), usually worded as "destroyed a kingdom" or "destroyed x cities". Then the story will treat it as a joke and everyone will act as if that never happened.

It just drives me crazy every time the main characters run into any villains after that. They'll be like "That evil noble stole money from the orphans! So evil!" And I'll be like "How many orphans did your friend over there murder?!" Or they'll be like "Those humans are so racist" And I'll be like "More racist that the genocidal monster?!"

I don't know, maybe it's just me but this one is actually the one that bothers me the most. With the other two, I can at least understand by some edgy teenagers might think that they are 'deep'. But these attempts to sleight off hand a genocide past me just feel like a personal insult. And it just feels so pointless and like such a bad match for the genre.



Anyway, one last thing I want to say. Can you all stop pretending that genocidal MCs are something original? Because they really are a dime a dozen, but all of these novels will have people talking about how different from all other stories they are.
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Excuse 1 - I committed genocide in self-defense:

Killing someone to stop them from killing you or someone else is usually considered to be morally acceptable. So if the only way to save your family/friends/people is to kill the group that's threatening them, that should also be fine, right? The fans of stories that do this will usually be like "If I had to kill thousands to save my loved ones I would do it! If you think that's wrong is because you have been brainwashed by modern Western values!".

The problem is that the very idea of killing thousands of civilians being the only way to protect your loved ones is completely bonkers.

In the cases when the protagonist is overpowered and the bad guys pose no real threat, I'd argue that even killing an enemy army is morally dubious when they can just be threatened instead. But even if the bad guys are a real threat, it's insane to think that killing civilians is necessary.

So these authors always need to turn their characterization and world-building into complete nonsense.

The most common method is to make every single member of the group of people to be genocided cartoonishly racist or hateful against the group the MC is a part of, to the point of being suicidal. Every farmer, child, and old lady would rather die than stop trying to kill the MC's people and will be extremely cruel to any that they can get their hands on (I was going to include an extra category of excuses called 'they deserved the genocide', but that tends to be just an addition to the other three).

An alternative is to make the method of genocide ludicrously contrived so that the MC 'has no other choice'. Like giving them a superweapon that will inevitably kill the enemy civilians along with their army (but not the civilians on our side somehow) and cannot be used to threaten them for some reason.
You cannot civilize the enemy as fundamentally with your foolish ways as a kill of their own is an attack against the entire society so they will all want blood. There is no such thing such as the individual as the individual, as it is an Enlightenment fiction. The individual as the pure individual as exclusively himself, the lone wolf is a fable as you humans are inherently social creatures and as such there are no 1 men islands.
Excuse 2 - I don't follow 'human morality' :

Let's just make the MC a dragon/monster/undead, that way you cannot judge their actions the way you would judge a human's, right?

The problem here is simple, the MCs of the novels that do this always think and act EXACTLY like a human, except for all the murder. If you ever see a novel be praised for having a character that acts like a REAL dragon/monster/undead, what that means is that the character is a human that will occasionally turn into an amoral murder hobo.

Naturally, if they didn't, the readers would not be able to self-insert as them to have their genocidal power fantasies.

When the author feels like they really want to insult the reader's intelligence, they will try to make a point that goes something like "There are so many stories with an MC that massacres monsters without a second thought, now the tables have turned!". As if killing mindless creatures that cannot be reasoned with was the same as a sapient being killing other sapient beings.

A lot of these """non-human""" MCs are reincarnated humans, and instead of making them struggle with their human memories, most authors will just claim that the transformation into a dragon/monster/undead took away their emotions and empathy, because the best way to make a character interesting is for them to not have emotions I guess.

These characters without emotion or empathy will then proceed to be very emotional and have a lot of empathy toward a group of other """non-human""" characters close to them. They'll just not have empathy towards humans or humanoids, because that's how empathy works, that's why there's no such thing as non-human self-insert characters and why cartoons with talking animals don't exist.

But only having empathy for your group of people while not thinking twice about killing those outside of it is something that certain humans have also done. And that's the thing, these characters that 'don't have human morality' are not non-human, they are just evil humans, but the narrative will pretend that they are not.
You humans and other such animals hold the tendency to favor yourselves be it on racial, religious, cultural or psychical categorizations and that is normal. However you humans fail to understand that the metamorphosis from human to spirit or whatever, is not a mere physical or psychological transformation but a transformation of the entire soul. All lifeforms are inbuilt with the Friend-Enemy Distinction and draw the line between the friend and the enemy to better survive as this Friend Enemy Distinction allows you to selectively apply mercy and force in a particularly beneficial form. You selectively favor your cat more than the cockroach or the snake despite its state of being. Just as you favor your cat over the cockroach or the snake, you favor your family and one true love more than the cat as you are one largely the same.

The extension of justice and mercy is a selective process that ultimately favors those of more similar natures than the foreign at both a conscious and subconscious level.
EXCUSE 3 - This story is light-hearted so my genocide doesn't count:

I will never understand why, but I've seen quite a few novels that are supposed to be 'light-hearted slice of life' include a character that's some powerful being that committed genocide on humans at some point in the past (sometimes even the present), usually worded as "destroyed a kingdom" or "destroyed x cities". Then the story will treat it as a joke and everyone will act as if that never happened.

It just drives me crazy every time the main characters run into any villains after that. They'll be like "That evil noble stole money from the orphans! So evil!" And I'll be like "How many orphans did your friend over there murder?!" Or they'll be like "Those humans are so racist" And I'll be like "More racist that the genocidal monster?!"

I don't know, maybe it's just me but this one is actually the one that bothers me the most. With the other two, I can at least understand by some edgy teenagers might think that they are 'deep'. But these attempts to sleight off hand a genocide past me just feel like a personal insult. And it just feels so pointless and like such a bad match for the genre.
It's not meant to be the main focus. Yeah, some doosh and his tribe robbed everyone through usury and loans and shiet but that isn't the focus of the story. Your story is not about the dooshes and his tribe doing trolling but the MC doing his stuff.
Anyway, one last thing I want to say. Can you all stop pretending that genocidal MCs are something original? Because they really are a dime a dozen, but all of these novels will have people talking about how different from all other stories they are.
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Sometimes it is simply justified as them being a psychopath like in Dexter. Well he was just a serial killer. I don't think genocidal protagonists are unique, but I don't really see a problem with them. If they aren't for you they aren't for you.
 

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in a combat story you need people to fight, and you need those people to be relavent. thus genocide is a requirement. one on one fights are purely for tournament arcs
 
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So I guess nobody read anything other that the bolded stuff...

I really should just leave scribble hub, nobody here seems to actually care about writing.
 

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So I guess nobody read anything other that the bolded stuff...

I really should just leave scribble hub, nobody here seems to actually care about writing.
Read it fully. I think you try to force your own morality onto others by projecting it into what they write. People are not the same. Your moral compass is not equivalent to others. Find something that aligns with your views, and your reading experience will improve.
 

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So I guess nobody read anything other that the bolded stuff...

I really should just leave scribble hub, nobody here seems to actually care about writing.
I read it! :blob_paint: And I'd like you not to leave, because I just noticed that your story is on my reading list and I want to read it some day.

That said, I think you're wrong. Characters like you describe do exist, but not for the reasons you say they do. I'll point to bad writing mostly for why they exist, but that's sorta irrelevant.

Really, I get not liking something like that. I wouldn't read it. Neither should you. You're stressing about something that doesn't matter. ...I do the same thing. That doesn't mean it's a good thing to do though.

If you really, really care, you could write out some tutorials on how to do it better. Make a contest, put out some writing prompts. Try to get people to write some better stories. And stop trash talking random strangers. It makes you look like the bad guy, no matter what kinda point you might have.
 

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There are plenty of real world examples though, so I find it hard to call unrealistic. People aren't saints and even saints do bad things for people they love.

If you are seeing these things a lot, then it means others must enjoy reading them. Sometimes it lets people feel a bit of that revenge they can't legally get in real life. It might just be justification, but so what? People read to be entertained. Probably.
 

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You should all stop calling this a website for writers.

The responses to this thread have made it obvious that Scribble Hub will never be anything more than a dumping ground for morally repugnant garbage
 

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You should all stop calling this a website for writers.

The responses to this thread have made it obvious that Scribble Hub will never be anything more than a dumping ground for morally repugnant garbage
Exactly. Why do you think most of Scribble Hub's authors are banned in Royal Road?
 
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