As long as you don't mind more harsh criticism, you should post it on as many sites as possible. You'll get more readers, more feedback, and sometimes even that one really motivated reader that writes a review or will follow your other stuff as well.(Also, should I post this on RoyalRoad?)
That's impressive! I could never see myself finishing a story, I did drop a few of them after all. Maybe one day I can do the same?
Post it everywhere, and bless us plebs so we too can finish our novels.