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This is just an opinion rant I gotta get off my chest.
First of all, biologically it makes no sense. The brain is still in a state of development at that stage of the human life, and the state of babies learning things like object permanence and the concept of language is literally their brain slowly acquiring the hardware to learn these things at all. I don't care if your character was a mature and educated 40-year-old in their past life, your brain literally isn't even capable of facial recognition as a baby, let alone able to function at a level to host the advanced thought processes you think your character would have.
Second of all, from a narrative standpoint it just suuuuucks. The stories literally go "well I've literally existed in the mortal coil of this world for 3 months and I don't even have the body strength to roll my fat baby ass over so I spent 18 hours today practising magic" fucking riveting writing my dude I am so glad you decided to literally start this character's life story at age 0 so we didn't have to miss any of these fucking exciting details.
I geeeeet it. You want your MC to be as OP as possible so having them literally master magic by the time they're 6 months old is the uuuuuuuh """"""logical"""""" conclusion to that desire but holy fuck. Nah. Nope. No thank you. I hate this. This is both factually incorrect and terminally boring and also? Also also? Just kinda sad? Because when you take a step back and think about it, read between the lines, basically you're asking me, the reader, to spend the first five chapters of your novel with the MC shittin' his pants like ten times a day off-screen. "Today I mastered wind magic" yeah but we both know you also let out the stinkiest liquid poop to ever grace god's green earth like five times during the process and also probably burped so hard your literal baby brain didn't know how to cognisantly deal with it and you cried uncontrollably for ten minutes straight.
2. I'm glad someone wrote it because I was gonna do it and then I was like no... no I'm too lazy to write a story just because of one trope I hate...
This reminds me: I find it frustrating how many cultivation stories are full of centuries old people that are no more mature than the teenagers are. It's especially bad in the "Went back in time to my youth after spending thousands of years cultivating" stories. Clearly their mental age did not change at all, despite all the knowledge they gained.the writer had no clue how to actually write a former old man like an actual former old man
It's a rant about baby MC training advanced magic, but I think the OP couldn't take the onslaught of the angry mobs.What happened to the thread name and first post