It's a new novel. I Just want a three chapter comment swap. I'll be really grateful.

[SurfAngel_1031]

And lastly do you recommend I eliminate the prologue? I'm beginning to think the issue is that it's pratically useless and more of a summary of chapter one making it seem a bit redundant. What do you recommend?

If it were me, I would ask myself how important the prologue was to the story. If you're intending to have the same information later, like it is now then sure pull it out.
If you want to use it to establish her quick situation and why she's on that cliff, then it's just fine.

After having read it and after your response, i think it's better used to show what led to her being up there. Then the end show the plunge like you have, then go immediately into chapter 1. Get the past out of the way since it's not heavily important.
The important theme seems to be - her reincarnation, "it" and her new job.
If that's what you want then work your way into it.
I honestly think once you've got it clearly mapped so others can follow along easy - you'll have a great story.

 

[Kittylovely]

If it were me, I would ask myself how important the prologue was to the story. If you're intending to have the same information later, like it is now then sure pull it out.
If you want to use it to establish her quick situation and why she's on that cliff, then it's just fine.

After having read it and after your response, i think it's better used to show what led to her being up there. Then the end show the plunge like you have, then go immediately into chapter 1. Get the past out of the way since it's not heavily important.
The important theme seems to be - her reincarnation, "it" and her new job.
If that's what you want then work your way into it.
I honestly think once you've got it clearly mapped so others can follow along easy - you'll have a great story.

I removed the prologue. Since her story will be explored as we move on its pretty useless so I removed it

 

[SurfAngel_1031]

Above all, have fun exploring her path. I deeply miss both Vivienne and Sylvie at this point. While I am happy that I finished both novels, I am rather sad that I have to part company with 4 characters that have been with me for almost 3 years.
When you've updated everything, I will take another look.
I have it set for a reader, so i will get updates as you do them