Coldwarrior12
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Hey guys
I’m currently writing this GL racing story and I think I’ve officially reached the point of no return. I just finished Chapter 3 and things went from zero to a hundred way too fast.
On one side we have a student confessing to her teacher and getting her heart absolutely crushed in a hallway. On the other we have a neon-soaked date that ended with a broken heel and a massive lie about the race of their lives.
The dynamic is getting messy and toxic and I’m lowkey obsessed with it. But I need to know from people who actually read GL... am I pushing it too far? Is the "only one spot left" twist a genius move or am I just being a sadist to my own MC?
Also I'm debating the first kiss. Should I let them have a moment of comfort after the explosion or keep the tension burning until someone literally catches fire?
Would love to hear what you think because my brain is fried from all the neon and drama.
I’m currently writing this GL racing story and I think I’ve officially reached the point of no return. I just finished Chapter 3 and things went from zero to a hundred way too fast.
On one side we have a student confessing to her teacher and getting her heart absolutely crushed in a hallway. On the other we have a neon-soaked date that ended with a broken heel and a massive lie about the race of their lives.
The dynamic is getting messy and toxic and I’m lowkey obsessed with it. But I need to know from people who actually read GL... am I pushing it too far? Is the "only one spot left" twist a genius move or am I just being a sadist to my own MC?
Also I'm debating the first kiss. Should I let them have a moment of comfort after the explosion or keep the tension burning until someone literally catches fire?
Would love to hear what you think because my brain is fried from all the neon and drama.
