In need of feedback!

[Mr.Brewer]

I only have four chapters out yet but I really want to know if they are good or not.
Please if you have time then give me a feedback.

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1106952/the-last-of-the-wizards/

 

[greyblob]

seems good to me. writing is decent and premise is intersting. I was intersted to read more.

but a word of advice: number your chapters.

 

[Mr.Brewer]

seems good to me. writing is decent and premise is intersting. I was intersted to read more.

but a word of advice: number your chapters.

I will ?