IM STARVING FOR FEEDBACKS!!!

[KingMusa]

Hello! I'm glad your here! So I'm re-writing my entire story in 3rd person as I've found out that's what I'm more comfortable with and better skilled with

Sooooo currently I have 6 chapters out, none of the chapters are too long, none of them exceeds 1.5k words but they are all above 1k words, so each chapter is a breeze to get through!

I'd love to get some reviews and comments on my story, please! I'm in need of attention on my work! So please go check out my story and leave a like, comment, and maybe even a rating, Thank you much appreciated!

Elenora's Academy of Magicka: Ken Granfold

 

[georgelee5786]

Check out Sailus Gebel's feedback thread. He'll give you some blunt feedback.

 

[RepresentingCaution]

 

[Story_Marc]

You should do some proofreading, there are things like missing periods.

 

[KingMusa]

You should do some proofreading, there are things like missing periods.

Noted! What about the story in general?

 

[Story_Marc]

Noted! What about the story in general?

Didn't really care for it with what I did read, but I'm not the target audience.

 

[KingMusa]

Didn't really care for it with what I did read, but I'm not the target audience.

Fair point