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RepresentingPride

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#1 Good color pallet with amazing contrast. Perfect title placement and font. The whole aesthetic from the numbers at the bottom to the titles at the top.

5/5

#2 Same as above but the color contrast between the character's color pallet and the background seems to meld a bit more.

4.8/5
Thanks, I think the same about the 2nd. Over the two I prefer the first.
 

Xam_I_Am

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Denoting a point for lack of title but I assume that you intend to put it in the open space up top. Wonderful color pallet and contrast!

4/5
That's fair, and I purposefully requested the title not be placed on it cause I felt it would have detracted from the illustration.
 

LuoirM

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After my PC went on strike I lost the original one, now I got this straight from the hub
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ThatTwat3000

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These were all really nice. Just waiting for the moment when someone post a completely white or black rectangle as a cover.
Since you so asked, I’ll provide... to an extent. Also, what do you think the story is about, just from looking at the cover?

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Aiyoki

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I've got two versions.

A tidbit to add a little bit of context to the images: The MC (The goblin) is gender-swapped into a super rare form of goblin... A Goblin Female. The specific race is a goblin variant, hence the tails you see in each image.

The Aviator goggles in the second image have contextual meaning later on in the story.

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Representing_Tromba

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4.2/5
The color palette and eeriness is very good but the lighting makes it hard to see what's going on. The title and name are well placed but I personally think a different font may suite it. Sorry for not getting to this sooner.
Since you so asked, I’ll provide... to an extent. Also, what do you think the story is about, just from looking at the cover?

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3.8/5
The lack of title will demote a point but it looks good otherwise. The lighting, coloration, and display are very well done. I would guess that it is about ghost x the black haired lady yuri.
This is just temporary.

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3.8/5
I really like this. Will have to demote 8/10ths of a point for lack of visible title. It's still there so I can't demote a whole point. The color palette, lighting, and design are great. Though there's a whole lot of space in the background, top, and bottom that could be used for the title, name, etc. The art is pretty good.
I've got two versions.

A tidbit to add a little bit of context to the images: The MC (The goblin) is gender-swapped into a super rare form of goblin... A Goblin Female. The specific race is a goblin variant, hence the tails you see in each image.

The Aviator goggles in the second image have contextual meaning later on in the story.

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4.5/5
5/5
Both are from good angles with excellent lighting and color schemes(though the top one doesn't pop as much due to the brown on different browns). The title is simple but very well placed on both. good job on both.
 
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Bartun

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The color palette and eeriness is very good but the lighting makes it hard to see what's going on. The title and name are well placed but I personally think a different font may suite it. Sorry for not getting to this sooner.
Thank you! I might modify it a bit in the future after finishing the book
 

ThisAdamGuy

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If she's a clown hunter why is she attacking members of KISS? Or do you see them all as clowns too (may have a point if so...)
It goes a bit deeper than the title makes it sound. Clowns (or klaons) feed on human laughter, but it has to be given freely. They can vampirize it out of people, but that kills the human and turns the klaon into a monster called a maiam. Henry is the Hunter, so whenever a klaon becomes a maiam, it's her job to kill it before it can hurt anyone.

Bottom line, I just thought "clown hunter" sounded like a funnier title than "mime hunter."
 
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