I wrote this, and I'm not proud.

[minionlover]

I wrote this a couple months back, I was trying to capture my thoughts in realtime and I hate myself for it.

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There is a duck sitting in the ocean, he is swimming, he is drowning, he needs to waddle away. The knight is chasing him, he has a sword, a big shiny sword, it can cut down a mountain, clearly it will kill the duck, so why isn’t he running? Oh right, he is drowning, how could I forget that? Open the door, but there is no door, this is this ocean, where no one can hear you scream. The knight has come closer, he is dashing atop of the water, he needs to hurry it up, or the duck might die and fall at the bottom of the ocean. How could he eat roasted duck if he cannot get the duck? He is starving, he has not eaten for days, days of starvation can make a man hungry, enough to kill another man. Maybe the duck should hurry it up, either he dies drowning, or he dies by the knight. How sad, the knight has made it, slicing the duck in half as its blood paints the beautiful blue horrifically red. The knight has stopped, he is beginning to fall, his armor is pulling him down, he cannot resist, he is beginning to drown. How sad. How sad. Open the door of death, open the door of death, there hasn’t been anything besides that. Take this pill and sleep, you need sleep.

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Was it deep? I don't know.

 

[RepresentingWrath]

What?

 

[idontknowwhoiam]

Xx_MinionLover_xX moment

 

[Mellohwa]

I don't know about was it deep, but at least it's relatable.....

I do need a sleep

 

[Proctor]

Is this a new attempt at rivaling the greatness that is Invisible Dragon? A new forbidden tome like My Immortal?

Whichever the case, if the knight can run across water why not do a drive-by pick up and maintain momentum instead of going for a swing. What a waste, smh.

 

[Agentt]

How sad

 

[IDKWtWrite-San]

How did you know the duck is a male?

 

[Jailbreak571]

Is this a new attempt at rivaling the greatness that is Invisible Dragon? A new forbidden tome like My Immortal?

The immortal dragon is great literature! Don't you dare compare it to our literature! Don't you know that thing inspired millions of beings and celestials? That... Thing also destroyed my brain cells simply because I cannot comprehend the greatness behind that novel! Don't you understand? The immortal dragon is the best masterpiece that was put into one of the forbidden texts of Korea! It is simply unmatchable! Recommended to read it by the way it was kinda fun not gonna lie.

 

[DarkeReises]

The immortal dragon is great literature! Don't you dare compare it to our literature! Don't you know that thing inspired millions of beings and celestials? That... Thing also destroyed my brain cells simply because I cannot comprehend the greatness behind that novel! Don't you understand? The immortal dragon is the best masterpiece that was put into one of the forbidden texts of Korea! It is simply unmatchable! Recommended to read it by the way it was kinda fun not gonna lie.

ah yes the greatest masterpiece, so great in fact you messed up the name

 

[Jailbreak571]

ah yes the greatest masterpiece, so great in fact you messed up the name

That was because I lost my brain cell responsible for the names! Poor brian, we will miss you.

 

[Fox-Trot-9]

You tried the Hemingway method of writing, didn't you?

 

[Deleted member 86291]

I wrote this a couple months back, I was trying to capture my thoughts in realtime and I hate myself for it.

—

There is a duck sitting in the ocean, he is swimming, he is drowning, he needs to waddle away. The knight is chasing him, he has a sword, a big shiny sword, it can cut down a mountain, clearly it will kill the duck, so why isn’t he running? Oh right, he is drowning, how could I forget that? Open the door, but there is no door, this is this ocean, where no one can hear you scream. The knight has come closer, he is dashing atop of the water, he needs to hurry it up, or the duck might die and fall at the bottom of the ocean. How could he eat roasted duck if he cannot get the duck? He is starving, he has not eaten for days, days of starvation can make a man hungry, enough to kill another man. Maybe the duck should hurry it up, either he dies drowning, or he dies by the knight. How sad, the knight has made it, slicing the duck in half as its blood paints the beautiful blue horrifically red. The knight has stopped, he is beginning to fall, his armor is pulling him down, he cannot resist, he is beginning to drown. How sad. How sad. Open the door of death, open the door of death, there hasn’t been anything besides that. Take this pill and sleep, you need sleep.

—

Was it deep? I don't know.

this is literally a piece of literature gold. wdym was it deep. humans die chasing after things but also they still desire them. once that objective is achieved death and ending does come soon. or idk that's how I interpret it

 

[Ilikewaterkusa]

I wrote this a couple months back, I was trying to capture my thoughts in realtime and I hate myself for it.

—

There is a duck sitting in the ocean, he is swimming, he is drowning, he needs to waddle away. The knight is chasing him, he has a sword, a big shiny sword, it can cut down a mountain, clearly it will kill the duck, so why isn’t he running? Oh right, he is drowning, how could I forget that? Open the door, but there is no door, this is this ocean, where no one can hear you scream. The knight has come closer, he is dashing atop of the water, he needs to hurry it up, or the duck might die and fall at the bottom of the ocean. How could he eat roasted duck if he cannot get the duck? He is starving, he has not eaten for days, days of starvation can make a man hungry, enough to kill another man. Maybe the duck should hurry it up, either he dies drowning, or he dies by the knight. How sad, the knight has made it, slicing the duck in half as its blood paints the beautiful blue horrifically red. The knight has stopped, he is beginning to fall, his armor is pulling him down, he cannot resist, he is beginning to drown. How sad. How sad. Open the door of death, open the door of death, there hasn’t been anything besides that. Take this pill and sleep, you need sleep.

—

Was it deep? I don't know.

what