I want to know my errors

[hustler]

I want to clarify that I am not promoting my series or anything of the sort. My intention is solely to genuinely understand and learn from my errors. As someone who is new to web novels, writing, and related areas, my knowledge is limited. Therefore, I would greatly appreciate your insights and guidance. : )

 

[Story_Marc]

Well, your first error is not putting this in the feedback forum, where this is better suited.

The second is not giving a link to your work.

 

[LowinKeshin]

XD