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done
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done.Far be it from me to be needy but if you have time to check out another story this is one I'm working on.
Gaming on a MUD is difficult
This is a story based on my characters background and journal that I played on a mud (Multi User Dungeon) over the course of several years. Dozens of people play a text based command line game at the same time. I figured I'd try to turn in into a story...www.scribblehub.com
Now that the thread is clear, I can rest easy knowing that everyone who put forward their book got their review.
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1/9
Well, I suppose I'd like a review now that I have a decent amount of chapters. All I can say to you right now thank you very much in advance. Have a cookie
www.scribblehub.com
Well, I suppose I'd like a review now that I have a decent amount of chapters. All I can say to you right now thank you very much in advance. Have a cookie
Echoes of Fire and Shadows
Julius, a twenty-year-old law student, suddenly finds himself trapped in a void where the color white reigns supreme... A place full of nothingness... In that realm of emptiness, Julius meets a mysterious man who informs him of his death and the reason why he has found himself in that empty...
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Add 1/9 at the top of your post, please.Well, I suppose I'd like a review now that I have a decent amount of chapters. All I can say to you right now thank you very much in advance. Have a cookie
Echoes of Fire and Shadows
Julius, a twenty-year-old law student, suddenly finds himself trapped in a void where the color white reigns supreme... A place full of nothingness... In that realm of emptiness, Julius meets a mysterious man who informs him of his death and the reason why he has found himself in that empty...
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Done, sorry about that.
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Add 2/9 to your post. Honestly, does no one read the description?
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done1/9
Well, I suppose I'd like a review now that I have a decent amount of chapters. All I can say to you right now thank you very much in advance. Have a cookie
Echoes of Fire and Shadows
Julius, a twenty-year-old law student, suddenly finds himself trapped in a void where the color white reigns supreme... A place full of nothingness... In that realm of emptiness, Julius meets a mysterious man who informs him of his death and the reason why he has found himself in that empty...
Done. Don't forget to place 2/9 on your original post. It helps me keep the tally. Also, I suggest you use a grammar checker. LanguageTool is a good one and not expensive at all.
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Thank you very much for the review!
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thanks, i did it, hopefully it is better now
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2/9
Please write in your submission 1/9 or whatever your number in the line is. If you do not, I will assign you a number, but it would be for the weekend after this one.
ONLY ONE BOOK PER PERSON!
Please no GL. The smut better have plot attached to it, if your story has smut. Otherwise, I can read anything. I will try dropping a review and hearts on each story and, if I find things I really don't like, I will PM the author, so they can consider my suggestions without people seeing them. I am bored and have 3 days off work (Weekend + St. George's day.). Therefore, I offer this thread as my way to give something to the wonderful SH community.
Done so far 24:
The Magic Lumberjack
Kane — who was once a mighty ax saint and master blacksmith — fell from his glory after completing his vengeance. He fled to a faraway kingdom but was killed by an invading demon in an unfortunate event. For an unknown reason, his journey somehow hasn’t ended. Kane found himself in...
Lewd Poems
Do bodily functions amuse you? Are you intrigued by reproductive organs? Does simply being a placental mammal tickle you? If you answered yes to any of the above questions, this book is for you! This is a collection of lewd poems from various authors. My husband either inspired me or...
LORD OF WHISPERS
To rise to the top or fall to oblivion. A world engulfed by war and chaos, where a single day decides who you will become, where it is impossible to escape fate. As the Lady of the Night shines brightly upon a few, their journeys intertwine. In an age of...
Dr Z’s Zombie Apocalypse
Doctor Abraham Henry Zolnikov has spent the last seven years isolated in his orbital laboratory, watching the Earth below descend into chaos. A biological virus combined with a nanite programming virus has created flesh eating, mindless abominations that hunt all other living things for food...
I-RANGRIS: Adventure in the world of Astiriya
When I-rangris find out a hidden portal inside her own cupboard which leads her into a different world, finds out how her life changes. What does she discover and where her destiny leads her? From Kingdoms to lands, slices of lives to the royal palace, Wars attend to seek peacefulness...
Spirit Exorcists
When Mark's troubled friend, Ruby, takes her own life, a grieving Mark heads to her suicide spot to pay his respects. In a strange twist of fate, he is attacked by a powerful spirit that reveals itself to be Ruby. Shen, an exorcist from the Spiritual Anomalies Investigation Bureau, an...
The Condemned Child
Ten years ago, the parents of Shinsato Katsuro were brutally killed by an army of demons known as Shifters. Now, at sixteen, Katsuro is determined to enter the Celestial Military Academy, begin training for the war effort and ultimately save humanity from this perpetual, brutal conflict between...
Everlasting Mage
Meet Matt~ Oh Magical Matt. He used to be a magician street performer. But after a one-stone-petrifying encounter with real magic, everything about his life changed. Now, he was an immobile statue that could not do shit about his life while time eroded itself. Magic was his only way to...
Free Lances
'All right, boys and girls, quit sucking your ma's teats. It's high time we bloody earn our paychecks!' Born in times of turmoil, orphaned at a young age, and raised amongst rowdy sellswords, young Reinhardt Edelstein joined the mercenary trade as well when he grew up. When misfortune finally...
The Problem Store
There was a guy who went by the name of Guy. He lives in a World, and has many stories to tell about it. Stories of relationships, indulgence, brotherhood, reconciliation, women, and skinship. Especially women and skinship. Guy has a lot of stories about women and skinship. You may or...
The Unsung Tale of the Trash Noble
In the game ‘Yelany: Your Legacy,’ Damian White was just an NPC who ‘mysteriously’ died after cheating on his yandere fiancée. And now I have transmigrated into his body. Help me… Please. (Heavily Inspired by High Class Mob) Discord: https://discord.gg/aEkp3pXqfR
My Succubus Roommate
It was a boring day with nothing really interesting happening. No, that's too real. The stars shined in the night sky, reflecting against the mans skin as he lazes back in his gaming chair. Now that sounds like I'm trying too hard. You know what, lets just start at the...
Breaking the Masquerade
Join our MC as he navigates through highschool as he comes to terms with his past and his inner demons . He is blunt , sarcastic ,charismatic , loves his gentleman talk , doesn't shy away from teasing the ladies and he bitch slaps people that have it coming. But under all the farce...
Escaping the Abyss
Chains and bottles of liquids are scattered across the dark room. If your hearing is sharp enough, you can hear screams echoing throughout the building. “Will I always be alone and remain caged in this hell?” ––– Dark clouds gather around the city, a mastermind in the shadows giving rise to...
The Lone Macaw
The moment the dying Aki opens his eyes, he is shocked. Not his hospice room but green meadows, blue sky and the villages of his favorite MMO await him. A fever dream? Or a new lease of life? To Aki it’s a chance to correct the story line he...
RE: All From His Seat
They say Krodoa is very much alive. 'That' planet of magic, home to countless races and supernatural phenomenon. This very world is set to undergo an enormous change as Michael, a human from Earth, is reincarnated into the body of a baby.
Fractal Plane: Awakener’s Pact
Mu, the world that exists parallel to our own. It is a world that harbors shadowy manifestations of people's feelings called Nullities. One day, Fragments, dimensions that connect Mu to the real world, begin manifesting in Shiroki City. With that comes disappearances of people who never...
Liquor Loving Luciel
The Prince of Noc has died. With his last breaths, he kneeled before the of the goddess as he pleaded to her with all his heart- 'dear goddess, please bring back my most precious thing.' He didn't expect much, but as he miraculously opened his eyes again with new...
Worldview
25 year old Aksel Liebert is thrown into a new world where Earth is dominated by a new system demanding each being take part in the 'scenarios'. Inspired by Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint.
The Adventures of a Supernatural Time Traveler
After waking up in the past, Lou Barret finds himself entangled with the supernatural. Eventually receiving the help of Scott Langston, a supernatural peacekeeper of sorts, and a witch named Elysif Avian. The three work together to keep the peace between the supernatural creatures of London and...
The Programmer’s Dungeon [Progression, LitRPG]
Vincent, a college student from Earth, has been transported to another world full of strange powers and fantastic monsters. Ideally, this would be the start of his journey to become a legendary hero, build an everlasting empire, and gather a personal harem. But no one said that this new world...
The City of Dul’lk, The Brimstone Blader
The City of Dul'lk is a Dangerous city, filled with superhumans, gangs, violence, and corruption. To the elite this town is a haven, but to the Average Joe this town is dangerous, but it isn't for Jackson nicknamed The Brimstone Blader.Gaming on a MUD is difficult
This is a story based on my characters background and journal that I played on a mud (Multi User Dungeon) over the course of several years. Dozens of people play a text based command line game at the same time. I figured I'd try to turn in into a story...Echoes of Fire and Shadows
Julius, a twenty-year-old law student, suddenly finds himself trapped in a void where the color white reigns supreme... A place full of nothingness... In that realm of emptiness, Julius meets a mysterious man who informs him of his death and the reason why he has found himself in that empty...
Wondering through the stars
Reincarnating may not be as easy as it seems. But it also comes with its benefits: Skills, Knowledge, Prestige, and even Foresight! Alde Lenarmend finds himself in unthinkable situations while the Universe itself is changing. Will he be able to unravel the mysteries behind his numerous...
The Desert Reaper
Peter Atkins is an infamous mercenary known worldwide for his sheer brutality and work in the tumultuous Middle East. He has assassinated over a hundred terrorists over his twelve-year career. His most recent job for the US military culminates in his demise, but the universe wasn't done with...
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Done. Do you update daily? I don't usually like isekais, but yours picked my interest.3/9The Desert Reaper
Peter Atkins is an infamous mercenary known worldwide for his sheer brutality and work in the tumultuous Middle East. He has assassinated over a hundred terrorists over his twelve-year career. His most recent job for the US military culminates in his demise, but the universe wasn't done with...
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