I NEEDZ DA FEEDBACK

[LiliToraAsi]

I've been working on a story called Glitched Reality and I want to know what people think of it and what I might need to change or improve. Does anyone want to read through it? I'll read your stories too and give you feedback as well if you want. Thanks and please enjoy the story!

Glitched Reality

A girl with abilities defying reality teams up with an ex-mercenary for hire to escape a secret organization! If you think you know this fantasy world, think again! This novel will be slow at first but stay with it and I promise it'll be worth the wait! Please rate this...

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[Deeprotsorcerer]

Pst, make a link in your siggy, or at least this post, for easier access.

I'll give it a look.

 

[LiliToraAsi]

Pst, make a link in your siggy, or at least this post, for easier access.

I'll give it a look.

thanks!

 

[Deeprotsorcerer]

Left you a comment on your first chapter, I think you did pretty good, all things considered. Ashla's predicament is interesting and those code monsters were suitably terrifying to imagine. I'd say one or two minor editing passes would bring it up to the level of what makes the trending list here, qualitywise.

 

[LiliToraAsi]

Left you a comment on your first chapter, I think you did pretty good, all things considered. Ashla's predicament is interesting and those code monsters were suitably terrifying to imagine. I'd say one or two minor editing passes would bring it up to the level of what makes the trending list here, qualitywise.

omgg thank you!! That's so nice!