I need feedback on my story

[FrenzyWanderer]

Hi, everyone....

I fixed the punctuation errors on chapter 01 to 05 using Grammarly and tried my best to write long descriptions in chapter 07. Can anyone review at least Chapter 06 and 07 compared to initial chapters

Thank you in advance

I refuse to level up! (Don’t ask about my sister’s opinion on this)

What would any normal person do after they isekai'ed to another world? Well that shouldn't even be a question. Grind up levels, become strong and conquer the world with overpowered cheat abilities. But Ren isn't that kind of 'Normal' What if he conquers the world without levelling up? without...

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