How to properly describe a beautiful character?

Story_Marc

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Hmm... I'll answer this question if you think I did a good job at walking the walk when describing a beautiful character.

Gerard's breath stopped. His mouth moistened as he gawked.

She sported clear, creamy skin and a moderate-sized bosom. Long, silky red hair, styled with blunt bangs and sidelocks that cascaded down her shoulders, framed her diamond-shaped face. Her longbow lips were painted a delicate shade of pink that complemented her piercing jade eyes. Her slender nose – long, straight, elegant – perfected the allure of her angelic face.

Like her ally, she boasted a predominantly black suit. However, hers featured a choker necklace, a jacket that harmonized with her crisp white blouse and red tie, a skirt that reached her knees, stockings, and heels. The ensemble melded with her lithe figure like two interlocking puzzle pieces.

"Good evening, Mister Turner,” she said, her voice smooth and articulate. “Thank you for coming. I offer my sincerest apologies for the cloak-and-dagger routine. My circumstances forced me to tread with caution. May I interest you in a drink? I can conjure up whatever concoction you desire, so long as it's non-alcoholic."

She stomped into the bank, her black pumps clicking on the polished marble floor. Her navy pantsuit hugged her every curve and swished with every step, drawing attention to her and the leather briefcase she clutched. The collar of her crisp white blouse, which she had tucked meticulously into her trousers, framed her neck with the elegance of a swan.

She hid her long, silky red hair beneath a plain brown wig she styled into an updo while a sleek, flesh-toned mask concealed her striking beauty. Anybody who paid her any mind wouldn’t see Cassidy Cain, the Cain heiress and corporate ambassador. Instead, they saw Gianna Rizzo, the private investigator.

“I wouldn’t label this meeting as ‘uneventful’,” Cassidy said, her outfit a deep teal silk blouse she left unbuttoned at the top, black capris, and loafers. It harmonized well with her creamy complexion, piercing jade eyes, and long, silky red hair which she wore in a layered cut with a straight fringe and two side locks that brushed her cheeks. “We did stumble upon some valuable intelligence.”

I'd rather you want to take my advice because you view me as someone credible to take it from. Also, I'd have to write out a lesson and I just... don't feel like it if I don't have to.
 
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