How do you write a romance after the confession?

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How do you write a romance after the confession? I've read a few stories where after the confession and the main couple ends up together, their interactions become odd and out of character, and act completely different from before they actually got together. Is it because it's harder to write couples and interactions for those that are already married/dating? I'm planning on trying to write romance where it continues after the confession, and i want to avoid this. Any advice?
 
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Depends on what you think of as 'weird' I'd say. Acting differently after you're a couple compared to before doesn't strike me as odd. After all, before that, you were in a different type of relationship (friends, co-workers, acquaintances, you name it) and now, you're lovers so you can act differently. Before becoming a couple, some things would have crossed the line.

Edit: As for avoiding that, I'd say the secret would be in letting the characters have a very close relationship before becoming a couple and maybe having them date for a while before getting together since dating would also allow for some romance already.
 

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"Weird" is a very broad word. Some couples would change greatly after getting together (for example if they were very restrained before), some won't (if they were very close from the start)
Rather than avoiding anything, I think you should check your couple and think about how they would behave. Would they change after getting together or not? Write it "realistically" so that it fits your couple, then it will work out
 
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My story had reach a point where the MMC and FMC confessed to each other, and due to their circumstances, they were unable to have that 'intimate moments' together. (Often)

That's why, I'm currently writing extra chapters that deals deeper into their relationship after the main arc has ended.
 

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I think, one of the reasons such stories might end up "weird" is because their standard story arc is finished with their confession/dating and the story loses some drive...

Stories in their core are about overcoming obstacles and the resulting change. And the same is more or less true for romance. A story where two people know each other, fall in love, confess, and stay together has no real conflict. The reason you often have either "the society" against it or a more specific enemy (love triangle, different values, missunderstandings, whatever). That typical first romance arc ends with the couple dating. Which is why a lot of shows/novels/manga/etc end with their first kiss, them dating, or a flashforward to their wedding day. The story is over.

A lot of those (at least to me) "weird after stories" don't introduce new obstacles and their drive disappears. And with no real way to go the characters change out of nowhere to give some feeling of progression or new conflict. Which can often result in "the sweet girl is now a bitch, because they have to fight" or alike.


If you want to continue writing their story without falling into that trap, then think about their next conflict or their next obstacle. Characters don't change out of nowhere with their confession, they should stay more or less the same (unless you make one pretending a plot point, but ...). So think of your life and what obstacles there could be. Even if you weren't married or lived together (don't know your age), you can surely think of stuff that you hated living with your parents.

Those new obstacles don't have to be big. No need for the next old lover or a big scene. There is that cheesy theme of "Everyday I discover a new side to you and I love all of them" in romances. But that is also the core to continue the story. So now they are together, maybe even live together: Do their parents like the partner? Do their partner like the parents? Do they have the same idea of "now" or "household chores"? Do they have similar taste in food? Or does one dislikes what the others like? Do they have the same (family) plan for their future? Do even both of them want to live together at the start? Maybe the man feels off because the woman makes more money? Or the woman feels off because the man doesn't make his feelings and opinions clear? The first date is always the big point in a romance. But what about the n-th date after they lived together for months? Do they even still go on dates?


There are a million little obstacles you can throw in there. Just like you do in the romance story before that, you just throw in more stuff. And with that you can make your characters change and grow closer to each other. If your confession was the "first big moment", you can find another big moment to work towards. One of them getting the approval of the parents? Them moving together? Talking about their first child? Actually trying to get the first child?

And if you throw those questions and obstacles at your characters, they'll change naturally and without the need to become "someone weird to keep the story moving"...
 
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"Weird" is a very broad word. Some couples would change greatly after getting together (for example if they were very restrained before), some won't (if they were very close from the start)
Rather than avoiding anything, I think you should check your couple and think about how they would behave. Would they change after getting together or not? Write it "realistically" so that it fits your couple, then it will work out
What I mean by weird is that they'll act out of character or even change personalities after the confession. Thanks for the advice though!
 

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I recommend being in some relationships and experiencing different dynamics to see how it goes. Much of what I write is based on experience, and my writing would probably be quite flat if I hadn't lived through these things.

Unfortunately, it's going to be difficult to get into relationships right now with the whole pandemic thing happening.
 

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How do you write a romance after the confession? I've read a few stories where after the confession and the main couple ends up together, their interactions become odd and out of character, and act completely different from before they actually got together. Is it because it's harder to write couples and interactions for those that are already married/dating? I'm planning on trying to write romance where it continues after the confession, and i want to avoid this. Any advice?

Please don't follow my "advice", I don't know anything about romance or romance writing. So wrote a lil something to brighten your day.

Make one of 'em friend zone the other and make the other one still try advancing on to the other. Or make em become a couple and time skip to next generation. After a dozen years, the oddity of their change if behaviour won't be weird. Or just make the characters die, just to avoid this kind of bind lol. Otherwise set their awkwardness so high, it becomes funny
 

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I think the biggest reason authors struggle with after-confession romances is because they wrote the story with characters that are just a vehicle for an emotional event (confession). It may feel like a character driven story but it's not, it's event driven. Without the event the characters feel empty and meaningless. It's only after the event (confession) that the author realizes they need to give characters personality and individual motives. Which is why they don't "feel" right. What you had before was a character without a personality and now the author realizes that's boring and tries to fill the gap.... and does so poorly.

Though this might super impolite to point out, these kinds of romance authors may have never been in healthy, happy long term committed relationships. They are writing romance based on ideals and wish fulfillment. I'm not saying that's bad or has no place, but it lacks.... the realistic touch. How two people act in a romantic relationship requires some understand of... well... how couples actually interact.

For the first, have some idea how your characters behave outside of a romantic setting. What are their aspirations? What are their flaws? Their strengths? Where are they now and where do you want them to be by the end of the story? Know them as people then add the romance in. Once the romance is added, ask what changes and what stays the same. Figure out where there will be points of friction and where they'll help each other be stronger. It doesn't have to be in-depth, but have a general idea in advance, to give yourself a guideline going forward.

For the second, you don't have to be dating or married to write good romances. I think it helps, but it's more important you know what makes up a good relationship in general. For this I can give you a very solid piece of advice:

Good romantic relationships have a solid foundation of friendship. They don't have to start as friends, it can start as a physical attraction. But if friendship doesn't grow alongside the romance, when the physical attraction fads the romance will die. It's being friends, finding the other person interesting without being kissy-kissy faced, that keep a relationship going even when he always leaves his underwear and pants on the floor or when she never cleans up her hair clog after a shower. It's friendship that creates laughter and inside jokes and it's also friendship that powers a couple through their flaws and irritations. When you write a romance, you're also writing a friendship.

I don't know if I write good romances (you can read my stuff to find out), but I've been married over 15 years. I love my husband to bits. He's my best friend. I tell him secrets I won't tell anyone else. I express the deepest parts of myself in ways I won't do with others, including family or best friends. I'm my most "raw" when I'm with him, which can be both good and bad. The same goes for him.

When you think of your couple, can you imagine them being that honest and trusting with each other like that? If you can't, their relationship is no better than a fart in the wind. It won't last and will gross out everyone around them. :blob_joy:
 

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Romance after confession no longer carries the needed momentum. Just put them together and that's the end of it.
 
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