How deep is your Worldbuilding?

CharlesEBrown

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Depends on which world... :D There is a good deal of detail but a lot of it is superficial on the stories posted here so far.

Among the ones I have not posted, I have another variation of the fantasy world I've been tweaking since '82 (the original version was destroyed in 2001 for reasons...). For another the "real world" has almost no detail but the depth of the virtual world is pretty deep.
 

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A single glance at my glossaries should tell you everything:

Glossary | Mini Wiki
Character Glossary

+ an entire story dedicated to being a monster encyclopedia

+ numerous power points including a 52 page training manual for one of 10 corporations - ImpulseWorks Training Manual Compendium
+ A powerpoint dedicated to the products produces by one of 10 corporations - Inflow Direct Administration Manual, which includes this mini periodic table of potions:

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+ A powescale chart detailing everything we know so far - Nexus Awakened Power Scaling - Full

And various massive diagrams detailing the entirety of the world and its mechanisms
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And a world map:



+ the number of files/stuff for all of my stories collectively in this shared universe:

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As the title suggested.
Hmm. My one has really good world building. It has a flower pot, an andrew tatte painting, 2 computers, 1 double bed, 1 window, 1 air conditioner, 1 door, 1 bookshelf.....
Oh btw I forgot to mention my book's name- "Sleeping Simulation". Mc's job is very hard. He has to sleep for straight 24 hours.?
 

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In reality, building my world took years. Like many people posted here, I have maps and travel guides and magical systems and such. Detailed mythologies and ancient texts.

I desperately wish someone had told me (and they probably did, I wish I had listened) to do as little world building as possible and instead focus on the characters, particularly their conflicts and emotional arcs. If I'd spent two weeks world building and one year building out every character to a level where I feel like I could have a conversation with them, I would have saved myself years of time and ended up with a 10x stronger book.
 

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Synopsis : Ge Xiu is a nefarious star criminal. After being arrested, according to the Interstellar Supreme Law, he will face two choices: either serve a sentence of 1156 years in black prison or enter countless virtual worlds and become a miserable person who is tortured and abused all his life. How much he suffers is how much his sentence can be reduced. Ge Xiu chose the second one without hesitation.

So… The trial surveillance system stared dumbfounded at the Former•Interstellar Most•Wanted•Criminal•Currently•Weak•Poor Ge Xiu in the virtual world, punching the empire, kicking the Federation, overthrowing oppression and building a new world. Then he turned his head to the camera and cried: “I’ve had a miserable life, really.”

“…” The surveillance system that was about to explode of anger: “Like hell I’d believe you!”

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After reading the synopsis, guess how much deep my world-building can be!
 

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Where did you make this map. Please tell me
:blob_cookie: Inkarnate.
A single glance at my glossaries should tell you everything:

Glossary | Mini Wiki
Character Glossary

+ an entire story dedicated to being a monster encyclopedia

+ numerous power points including a 52 page training manual for one of 10 corporations - ImpulseWorks Training Manual Compendium
+ A powerpoint dedicated to the products produces by one of 10 corporations - Inflow Direct Administration Manual, which includes this mini periodic table of potions:

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+ A powescale chart detailing everything we know so far - Nexus Awakened Power Scaling - Full

And various massive diagrams detailing the entirety of the world and its mechanisms
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And a world map:



+ the number of files/stuff for all of my stories collectively in this shared universe:

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:blob_cookie: Mare incognitum. Mare is neutral.
 
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Deep enough. Some of my older books went full Tolkien (Juryokine and The Gray Ranger) with ancient histories, mythologies, cultures, etc. I just don't have the mental energy for that anymore. I still enjoy worldbuilding, but I limit it to stuff that will actually impact the story. Like in Henry Rider: Clown Hunter, I had a lot of fun coming up with the klaon home dimension, their culture, etc, but I haven't gone back into their ancient history because it was never relevant to the story (yet).
 

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The deepest i know is Andur (royalroad), this mfer made a fking multiverse of his books, with MC (and lover/heroine/FL) being always some kind of reincarnations. Some standalones, some novels being like arcs to others.
This guy was a madlad. :sweating_profusely:







(sorry for the swearing that is how much mindblowing he did to me, and one of my early fav english writers, and also one among the bests of royalroad) (also he did multiverse before the slang of it existed by marvel, and same for the deadpool-like comedy that in marvel they cant do it themselves)


ps : one particular scene made cry at least 5+ times (each re-read). Or heck just mentioning, i feel like crying. I feel my tears glands working.

Hmm... sounds like a good role-model to me. No, seriously. I'm actually in the process of doing something similar. Thus far, I have just started into my 4th series set in the same grander multiverse. I also have a single story going on with Earth that is pulling them all together, with the rest of the stories being reincarnated into other worlds in the multiverse.

I even created a 2-tier magic system in which there is a very basic magic system that uses the power of belief from sentient creatures to empower godly entities and also create 2ndary magic systems unique to each world.

There is also a mechanic in which legends and beliefs tend to echo across the multiverse, so there are identical mythos throughout the multiverse by different but strangely similar names that appear on multiple different worlds

That's just the top-level world-building. I go deep into the mid-level world-building too. (That would be towns, cities, and political boundaries. This is also the level things like custom languages appear in.) I don't really touch the low level world-building (the microbiology and evolutionary chain that caused the wild-life of the world to develop and things of that sort, and arranging what the local food-chain looks like.) But, I'd say the mere fact that I know the parameters of high, middle, and low-level world building in the first place means a lot about my world building even if I have chosen not to go too deep into the low-level stuff.
 

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Hmm... sounds like a good role-model to me. No, seriously. I'm actually in the process of doing something similar. Thus far, I have just started into my 4th series set in the same grander multiverse. I also have a single story going on with Earth that is pulling them all together, with the rest of the stories being reincarnated into other worlds in the multiverse.

I even created a 2-tier magic system in which there is a very basic magic system that uses the power of belief from sentient creatures to empower godly entities and also create 2ndary magic systems unique to each world.

There is also a mechanic in which legends and beliefs tend to echo across the multiverse, so there are identical mythos throughout the multiverse by different but strangely similar names that appear on multiple different worlds

That's just the top-level world-building. I go deep into the mid-level world-building too. (That would be towns, cities, and political boundaries. This is also the level things like custom languages appear in.) I don't really touch the low level world-building (the microbiology and evolutionary chain that caused the wild-life of the world to develop and things of that sort, and arranging what the local food-chain looks like.) But, I'd say the mere fact that I know the parameters of high, middle, and low-level world building in the first place means a lot about my world building even if I have chosen not to go too deep into the low-level stuff.
Just go read his books and try to ask around or googling the "chronology" to read his books.
Also, his 2 best books are "Beyond?" and "Coeus?" (standalones)

best fantasy and sci-fi+fantasy
english WNs EVER.

They are fking masterpieces.
 

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I know what it was like before its current state. I know what caused the current state. I know the current state and how it will be in the ending. There's a lot in between that just doesn't matter, so I haven't thought much about it.
 

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I think that WB should not be way to complicated and that it should be proportionate to the length of your novel.
It should be made so that it's easy for readers to comprehend.

Having said that, I wouldn't say that the WB in my novel is vast and deep in comparison to some like LOTR.

However, I would also like to add that it's also important to consider how detailed one's WB is.
You would be surprised what you could do with a small cast of characters/a low number of countries/a shallow magic system/ etc.

I estimate my novel to end at around 600k words, which is pretty short compared to the majority of other novels.
Nevertheless, I have about 100 named characters, 14 organizations, and a half-opened magic system.
How?
Well, some of the most important battles and events in my novel aren't even described since they happen outside of MC's pov.
Not even 5 of my characters have their biggest fear or favorite whatever known.
The most crucial thing a character needs is a goal, purpose, and ideology.
Just with that you can put those characters in a desired setting and the chaos will emerge by itself.
There are around 7 side characters that have a bigger impact on the world of my novel than the MC, despite living in the same era as them!


TL:DR My novel's WB is not deep by what the definition would be, however, it is very deep considering all the things that do happen and are present and yet DID NOT make it into the wall of text. I left it out to avoid filler and unnecessary information.

Remember, my novel follows the MC, but that doesn't mean that the same amount of things don't happen to other characters.
Some of those are vaguely mentioned while others are hinted.
 

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The deepest i know is Andur (royalroad), this mfer made a fking multiverse of his books, with MC (and lover/heroine/FL) being always some kind of reincarnations. Some standalones, some novels being like arcs to others.
This guy was a madlad. :sweating_profusely:







(sorry for the swearing that is how much mindblowing he did to me, and one of my early fav english writers, and also one among the bests of royalroad) (also he did multiverse before the slang of it existed by marvel, and same for the deadpool-like comedy that in marvel they cant do it themselves)


ps : one particular scene made cry at least 5+ times (each re-read). Or heck just mentioning, i feel like crying. I feel my tears glands working.
What's the name of it?
 
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