Honest feedback

[hartetg]

Hey can someone read this and give me honest feedback? I have been reediting it still editing.

The Rising Phoenix – A Tang Dynasty Novel | Scribble Hub

 

[2021]

Hey can someone read this and give me honest feedback? I have been reediting it still editing.

The Rising Phoenix – A Tang Dynasty Novel | Scribble Hub

The whole thing?

 

[hartetg]

The whole thing?

Just how far you want to go

The whole thing?

if you don't like it you don't like it. I don't want you to feel you have to read the whole thing.