Hi everyone! I'm a new author here, writing from Japan.

YKKJP

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MajorKerina

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Welcome. I took a look at your story and it's really good! The only thing I would offer in feedback is there's a lot of chapters/parts released in a short amount of time. When a story is starting it can be overwhelming for new readers if there's a lot of chapters at once. Good luck to you and your story!
 

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that seems fantastic , i will give a look to this too. i am also writing an investigative/crime story. i hope you will get as much attention as possible
 

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Welcome. I took a look at your story and it's really good! The only thing I would offer in feedback is there's a lot of chapters/parts released in a short amount of time. When a story is starting it can be overwhelming for new readers if there's a lot of chapters at once. Good luck to you and your story!


Thanks for the feedback! I’ll try to pace it better. Glad you enjoyed the story!
 
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