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ThisAdamGuy

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I Applied for a Delivery Job and got Turned Into a Flying Reindeer?! was always supposed to be my own little inside joke. "Let's take something from just about everyone's childhood and turn it into a shonen anime without the anime," I said to myself about a year ago. It will be funny and could never possibly backfire in my stupid face. I would write one book a year and see how many people I could get emotionally invested in a story about one of Santa's reindeer trying to keep Krampus from taking over the world. I would put only the minimum amount of effort into it and deliberately write it with as little self-awareness as possible.

Today I deleted half of what I'd written for the second book because I thought of a better, more emotionally engaging way for the story to go.

Help me, I've fallen for my own con :(

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I have deer girls. And boys. And elf boys and girls. But they're all at least in their twenties. Does that count?
Cat girls of questionable age are not negotiable.
Perhaps fox girls, since fox is the dog hardware running the cat emulation, but deer girls?
You went too far with deer.
But don't worry.
There is no reason to cry over every mistake.
Think positively!
Now there is a chance to do it properly!
 

ThisAdamGuy

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Cat girls of questionable age are not negotiable.
Perhaps fox girls, since fox is the dog hardware running the cat emulation, but deer girls?
You went too far with deer.
But don't worry.
There is no reason to cry over every mistake.
Think positively!
Now there is a chance to do it properly!
Ah yes, Santa Claus and his team of flying...

Cats.
 

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Don't worry, long unnecessarily descriptive title doesn't make a light novel.

You need catgirls of questionable age for that.
ZZZ Nekomata?

I Applied for a Delivery Job and got Turned Into a Flying Reindeer?! was always supposed to be my own little inside joke. "Let's take something from just about everyone's childhood and turn it into a shonen anime without the anime," I said to myself about a year ago. It will be funny and could never possibly backfire in my stupid face. I would write one book a year and see how many people I could get emotionally invested in a story about one of Santa's reindeer trying to keep Krampus from taking over the world. I would put only the minimum amount of effort into it and deliberately write it with as little self-awareness as possible.

Today I deleted half of what I'd written for the second book because I thought of a better, more emotionally engaging way for the story to go.
To OP's post, I say this: You got emotionally invested in the story. So now you want the readers to be emotionally invested. My main story world (Mysthavia - Lay the Dragon and DragonBound) Also began as a joke based on the old comic square of the dragon with a little dragongirl, and the king yelling at the hero "I said SLAY the dragon, not LAY the dragon!"

But I now have 2 full novels and am planning Book 3.
 

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I do a lot of deleting tbh, but I made a real for myself, if it gets posted on a Billie sight, I gotta roll with any mistakes I make. Just a fun little challenge to develop my skills. You on the other hand have it rough, as long as you like what you write, that is good enough
 

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I should do a crossover between IAFADJAGTIAFR?! and Henry Rider next year and call it A Very Henry Christmas.
 
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