Hello I am newbie

[SiaoyueM]

Hi everyone, I'm a newbie who began as an online writer.
I'm from a non-native English-speaking country and learning English, writing by myself (no plotting, treatment, or any principles. All of my ideas are written in a few lines).
I'm trying my best to write English fiction. I would like to find someone else to read my fiction. Please advise me if there are any flaws, especially in grammar.

My fiction name; Return of the Villain's wife

Look forward to see all your comments, :) Return of the Villain's Wife.

 

[CharlesEBrown]

Hi everyone, I'm a newbie who began as an online writer.
I'm from a non-native English-speaking country and learning English, writing by myself (no plotting, treatment, or any principles. All of my ideas are written in a few lines).
I'm trying my best to write English fiction. I would like to find someone else to read my fiction. Please advise me if there are any flaws, especially in grammar.

My fiction name; Return of the Villain's wife

Look forward to see all your comments, :)

If you can include a link either by copying and pasting the "header" here, or in your signature line that can make it easier to find.

Is it this one: Return of the Villain’s wife | Scribble Hub

 

[SiaoyueM]

If you can include a link either by copying and pasting the "header" here, or in your signature line that can make it easier to find.

Is it this one: Return of the Villain’s wife | Scribble Hub

Oh, Thank you so much for your help and good suggests.