Healer Inspired Hobby Novel?!!?!? (No, it's not like that.)

[MakBow]

In short, this is more of a hobby novel I'm posting alongside my main novel as it allows me to keep my mind fresh (for some reason), but I would still like criticism as it's more of me taking Redo of Healer, Failure Frame, Sentenced to be Hero, and The Wrong Way to Use Healing Magic as my inspirations to craft this with a few game inspirations.
Just tell me what you think about the first chapters. (Warning: Sensitive mentions like Rape)
Don't ask the level at wish I want, just give it to me, plain and simple.
(Oh, and don't worry, it's not mindless smut. I can't even write a sex scene right. You'll only really get characterization in sexual scenes)

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[AliceMoonvale]

I'll give it to you, plain and simple.
'Hobby novel' and 'Redo of Healer' in the same title or sentence is wild.

You can pick a better anime to write your own rendition of.
It doesn't need to be one of those most heinous, vile, rape torture porn anime known to man.
Personally, I wouldn't want the name of that anime tied to me in any way, shape, or form as a writer.

Good luck.

 

[MakBow]

I'll give it to you, plain and simple.
'Hobby novel' and 'Redo of Healer' in the same title or sentence is wild.

You can pick a better anime to write your own rendition of.
It doesn't need to be one of those most heinous, vile, rape torture porn anime known to man.
Personally, I wouldn't want the name of that anime tied to me in any way, shape, or form as a writer.

Good luck.

Oh, don't worry! By no means is it that rape, torture porn, stuff. It's more so a small inspiration for my own world, like the fact my main character is a healer and is out for revenge. He's not going to do any of that stuff. I couldn't even write that weird that stuff if I tried, I suck at writing sexual stuff, let alone rape.

 

[Fairemont]

Yeah, the moment I saw that title I was like "oh, no..."