Have you ever wanted to read a light novel that feels like a magical story from the Middle Ages?

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Fabi_Hp1718

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We invite you to read my light novel, I just started it and believe me I have a very good story, I also thank you for your support.THE DARK LION OF CAMELOT!!
Te invito a leer mi novela ligera, apenas la comencé y créeme tengo una muy buena historia, también te agradezco tu apoyo

¡¡¡EL LEÓN OSCURO DE CAMELOT!!!!!
✌️✌️
 

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Given that his account consists half of numbers, I'm not exactly sure how serious they are about becoming a writer.
 

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Some stuff says bot. Other stuff says spanish translation. The tell tale signs of common direct translations mistakes like the first line of the synopsis.
 

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I like to think that in

¡¡¡EL LEÓN OSCURO DE CAMELOT!!!!!
✌️REMEMBER it✌️

Oscuro, the Lion of Camelot’s, name is being yelled like a Brazilian football announcer on a winning goal, as well as the word Remember, but it is inexplicably brought down to the vocal range of golf commentary for the word it.
 

Fabi_Hp1718

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Some stuff says bot. Other stuff says spanish translation. The tell tale signs of common direct translations mistakes like the first line of the synopsis.
I appreciate your comments, only that I strive to give a good translation, I am Latin and I do several translations of my novel in different places some do not coincide but I try to read it as natural as possible
Speak English.
I'm sorry but I try to make my novel reach all audiences, Latin American or American
Dado que su relato consiste la mitad de números, no estoy seguro de hasta qué punto se toman en serio el convertirse en escritores.
Números ¿Qué quieres decir con eso? Dime si alguna vez has escrito o intentado hacer una novela, agradecería tus comentarios para poder mejorar.
 

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I'm sorry but I try to make my novel reach all audiences, Latin American or American
This is an English speaking website. The forums have rules that say you have to speak English because moderators don't speak other languages.
 

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We invite you to read my light novel, I just started it and believe me I have a very good story, I also thank you for your support.THE DARK LION OF CAMELOT!!
Te invito a leer mi novela ligera, apenas la comencé y créeme tengo una muy buena historia, también te agradezco tu apoyo

¡¡¡EL LEÓN OSCURO DE CAMELOT!!!!!
✌️✌️
Speak English
 

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For the synopsis, This:
Before starting you would support me a lot by rating and commenting on my work without further ado, I thank you for your time

Immediately feels like you are demanding support in a weird way. A simple change of:

Before starting, if you would please support me by rating and commenting on my work without further ado, I thank you for your time

You can remove the please if it feels a bit too desperate or begging for your tastes.
 
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